| "Purity: Revolution" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 18:58 CDT
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Whoa, I mean like wow..This was very sad I cried, I feel so sorry for Cain. It just turned out so wrong for Sebastain, losing his mate, and unborn child, and then losing his happy son and him changing all serious way before his time, but atleast he died a honorable death, but he did his best...This was a good and very very very very deep one shot, you are great and i love all your work.... I have one question though, how come Cain and his father have different last names? But keep up the good work and i hope you continue writting!! :)
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Reviewed By: krazee-mad On: February 10, 2007 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work. You must do so much research! great job :]
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 10:42 CST
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My best friend's nick name is Akina, so I have a bit of a connection with Akinako in this story. Just a little bit longer was too long for a changed destiny. A sibling for Zelig would have probably chanced their entire outlook. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: Beautifully Written
Reviewed By: Miseria [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to say, as my title indicates, I thought this was beautifully written. Not only was it thought-provoking, wonderfully tragic and yet heart-warming at the same time, and well written, but it also captured the love a father has for his child and the lengths he will go to to see that his child is safe and free from harm, whether in the Inu-Universe or in our own. It fits perfectly into the Purity series, and though this is a short story, fitting into the confines of what one would consider a "one-shot," as always, your characters are well-defined, almost leaping off the computer screen and into one's heart. The sincerity and emotion in the story literally brought me to tears. I applaud you.
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 00:28 CDT
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WOW!! I so was about to start crying at the end!!! That was an amazing piece of work, you should be very proud. It's great to see how Cain's parents passed on, and how he had become the man he is. Again, great work. And sorry it took me so long to get a chance to read it, I wish I would have been able to do so when you posted it.
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Reviewed By: White Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautifully written, i'll have you know that it made me cry three times and now my eyes are all piggy and red, and my nose is all stuffed up it's amazing the life you breath into characters and places. i've read very few books that can do what you do. as always you have written another story that has not failed to touch my heart
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll have u kno that i wont be able to stop crying for another ten minutes!! and my nose is gonna be stuffy for another ten minutes after that..... Great job writing this.....explains alot bout Cain....
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 11:15 CDT
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omg!!! ::cries:: that was so sad!! ouch. my heart hurts. :(
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am literally in tears right now...it was so well written and I am glad that I had the opportunity to read this...I plan to have other people read your work as well so that they can come to understand this wonderful tale...it was beautiful...and heartwrenching...one of the best stories I have read and hope not to be the lasy from you
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 23:34 CDT
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It' never ceases to amaze me how you bring your characters to life and for a brief moment while I'm reading your work I am carried away to another place and another time where my emotions no longer belong to me but are caught up in the whirlwind of fantasy that you create causeing me to laugh or cry as was the case for this story. Sebastian is so strong, and the brief glances we get to see of his realtionship with Daniella are beautiful. His powere is tangible, as is his grief and his resolve for getting Zelig to a place where he can be nurtured to become the Tai Youkai that we all fall in love with. Thank you for writing this tale :-) Thank you for giving us Sebastian and Daniella and for showing us where the more somber aspect of Cain's personality comes from. Brava!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THAT MADE ME CRY!~!!~!!~!~!~!~!~ That was so well written, i loved it. Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 11:05 CDT
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Oh wow. That was so awesome. I even cried. Keep up the great work Sue! :D
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 15:27 CDT
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I like that you gave us some insight into Cain's background. It was so sad but at the same time I already know what was to come of these to parents/lovers/soulmates. Everytime I think you've reached your peak at your writing (never in a bad way lol) you show me that a true author excels always. Wonderful job. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, Sue. A wonderful look back on Cain's childhood, and a very sad one at that. And while I felt bad for Cain, I really felt bad for Sebastian for all that he went through. But I was glad when he finally got to join his mate in the afterlife after suffering for so long without her. Anyway, enough of my babbling. XD All in all, I really enjoyed this story and I'm glad you shared it with us. ^_^
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