| "The Gamble" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Deadly-Crimson On: June 26, 2006 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god, so....sad! angsty! I can tell you this is a great fic because only good angsty fics make my stomach hurt like hell. And right now it hurts A LOT. I love this story!! Poor inu. You need to update sooooooooooon!!!
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Title: Crryying
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Owww, I swear my heart hurts just reading the angst in your story, it's reaal good. Just tell me that in the end Inuyasha gets the girl even if he has to go through hell, he deserves it.
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: June 08, 2006 23:15 EDT
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Oooo...we all know which choice Inuyasha will take here, ne? lol Very interesting...very similar to high school in real life though maybe with less physical violence..
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: lIZ1232 On: June 05, 2006 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story so far because it has a very good plot to it please update soon
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Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holly shit this rules i want more more more ...pretty plz!!!
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Reviewed By: IC On: June 02, 2006 18:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Im luvin ur fic
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Title: inugurl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: June 02, 2006 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey me again and too lazy to sign in but anyway plz update soon cuz i love ur ff JA for now
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 (logged out) On: June 02, 2006 01:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey just wanted to say you got a cool fic goin on and a unique style of writing it. keep on writin and i'll keep readin.
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Title: lihz
Reviewed By: inugurl27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and its good to kno why your are doing this to prove that life is an absoult gamble but plz plz plz update soon
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI) On: May 17, 2006 16:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
ewh, turning point! hehe, that was such a good end to that chappie, but it was still a cliffie =/ heh. still heart you though!
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 17, 2006 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYAAAYYY!! The new chapter was great. If Inuyasha dosn't tell Kagome how he feels, then I am going to bonk him on the head.
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Title: inugrl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: May 13, 2006 13:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you have to update!!! ur right life IS a gamble and sometimes you have to take that gamble and risk gainig everything or loosing evrything!! well, plz update soon i love it
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 12, 2006 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT. I want to know what happened. IT's very eye-catching. It just screams "READ ME". Please update soon.
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI) On: May 12, 2006 10:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
great start! i cant wait to see where your going with this and what happens. its really drawing me in.
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Reviewed By: ObtuseNeneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, it was good. I really liked it. At first it made me laugh because of the attitude. Then the story started moving and I was like 'Damn, what happens?' Yeah I thought about it for a minute. 'Okay, kill them.' I wish you luck with future chapters that you put any effort into writing. Keep it up and I will keep reading! ;)
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