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Reviewed By: whiteorchid On: April 25, 2008 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most intense short story I have ever read! The emotions and the rawness, it was just emotional purging to the max. It was very clever to write the story in Inuyasha's point of view, it made it more real and less frilly happy sunshine! I'm not usually into dark fics, but this one was definitely worth the read!
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Title: Aww man its over!!!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm usually one to read long stories and just pass up the shorter ones, but after reading this awesome story, it totally changed my view on the length of them. I really loved the ending it touched me!! I really like how you typed the dialogue for Inuyasha, and had all the drama etc fit within 7 chapters! And I'm glad that their lives went on nicely! with the exception of Kikyo, but her death helped them realize that if they continued with their lifestyles they had before, even around the time Kagome saved them,it could of been them being buried. Inuyasha and Kagome are truly in love with eachother I love how you created their relationship,!! Ok this is one of the longest reviews I EVER DONE, but EXCELLENT job, hope to read some of your future fic's =) Hollywood1 OUT
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked this! Very powerful story with an even more powerful message. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Such an awesome ending! Loved it, and can't wait to see what u come up with next!
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Title: .....WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?......
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome fic!! I love it, and I adding this to my FAV!!!. Man are the gang f'd up or what? I like how Inuyasha is so in love with Kagome but yet still so stubborn. Great plot and style of writing. UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!! I see it's been awhile since you updated! THIS story is to GOOD it be left undone!!!! so hope to read the latest chapter =)
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I just know that this is going to end ip great! Anyway, please update!
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Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOT!! GO INU! GO GET YO GURL!!....ahem,my apologies friend.Didn't mean to get so emo on ya! Update soon Luna-sama!!
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 04:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit, that was intense. and dark. really really very good story. excellent. and really really real. it's so very real and accurate, it's like living it to read it. I think you have absolutley completely accuratly captured the emotions, feelings, frienships and lifestyles of these characters and these situations, were they real. reading this story feels in no way like reading a work of fiction, but rather a harrowing true-life story. I can't wait to read more and more and more. It's really good. so good i am definatley checking out all of your other stories (though not tonight, it is really late XD) and have high expectations for them ;)
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Reviewed By: nana o. On: October 24, 2006 22:31 EDT
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good story. next chapter pwetty pwease?
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Reviewed By: Lihz On: October 24, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story and imn glad u updated soo i hope u update soon AGAIN!! lol
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Title: good job!
Reviewed By: necoconeco_1@hotmail.com On: October 24, 2006 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i've read your stories before (and i LOVE them), but for some reason i never read this one... anyway, i had you on my fav list and suddenly an email popped up and said you revised chap 5, so i said "why not? i like the other fics." i've only read chap 1, but i think you're on the right track (yet again). the way you wrote inuyasha's little speech was perfect! i just wanted to encourage you and to keep you happy so i get more reading material! keep your muse happy!
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 10:18 EDT
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love it love it love it love it love it love it I'm in a very shitty mood now, so i can't go into long descriptions of how i appreciate your story,. I just wanna say love it love it love it love it.... So please update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 00:42 EDT
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Oh god. This is an emotional rollercoaster. A very good story, but a roolercoaster.
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Reviewed By: FicFan7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 02:08 EDT
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hey, awsome fic you have goin. your style of writing is truely unique and the plot is awsome, anyway i love your fic so please keep updating
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Reviewed By: Azalie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gorgeous. this story is amazing! i honestly can't believe it doesn't have more reviews, it deserves like...100000000? XD it's so raw and angsty- i love it! i honesty found it hard to read cause i wanted to cry, and i do love how it's set up without large chunks. chunks are good, and i do love them in stories, but the way you have your story set up makes seems to suite your writing style really well. you seem to have a real knack for describing emotions without using too many words, i know some writers write alot without actually saying anything at all (i think i do that lol) but this story is fucking awesome! your theme of 'take a gamble' through life thing is really profound too, i don't know what it is, but it had me wriggling in my sleep just thinking about it and how many times in my life i personally fucked up like inuyasha did. it seems strange but this story really hits freakishly close to home and just the thought of how so many things that have happened to me could've been changed by taking the other path from fork in the road. well, just had to return to give you a comment, here's hoping you update soon ^_--
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