| "Sedition of Will" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: An Unfinished Gem
Reviewed By: Ellieness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2021 14:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, this story was so good! I especially loved the dance
you created for Rin!!! If I were to note any complaints, it would
be that you dropped this story at such a cliffhanger... Thank you
for the wonderful read :)
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Reviewed By: indomitable spirit On: October 12, 2007 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My good fortune in stumbling across this wonderful story. Please do not stop writing. I totally identify in how you characterized your Sesshoumaru. The maturity of a physical body but just coming to terms with his emotional status. How thrilling to see you unveil layer by layer, chapter by chapter, this side of him and I love that they are both seeming to be more heightened in their awareness of one another. I adore the scene where she fell asleep then woke to have her writing inked on her face. TOO ADORABLE! I do write Sess/Rin in FF. If you get a chance, please drop by and read my "wares". But more importantly, please do continue. I hope you don't let this gem languish.
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Title: LOVE U'r Storie
Reviewed By: Renae B.242 On: June 21, 2007 11:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love U'r storie so far and I sure hope that U continue writing and update soon! Soon?!?!?!?lol jk as fast as u can get to it. thank u, Renae
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Reviewed By: WynnFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 12:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to update this! I'm curious, insanely curious! *Eyes widen in a pleading look* Update, please? I love this story so far!
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Title: Kami-sama
Reviewed By: Odi et amo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 20:00 PST
Comment/Review:
Ooh!!! I like his gift! It makes me suspicious!
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Reviewed By: ThePinkNinja7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm dieing over hear.. waiting for a new chapter to come... this is such a cliff hanger.... i'm getting frustrated and excited for another chapter it's driving me insane... pleeeeeeeeeease continue... pretty please.... This story is just so damn good..... I can't wait to see what happens next. This is just to good to be true. That's why you have to keep typing.. I usually don't beg... but this kind of withdrawl is just so evil. Please, please, please... write some more, I know you may be busy.. but ahhhhhhhhhhh please make time.. T_T I'm going to go mope off now... *Sniffle* ~Sincerely, The Pink Ninja
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Title: ch. 11
Reviewed By: sesshy_lover261 On: June 14, 2006 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best!
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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: sesshy_lover261 On: June 13, 2006 21:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
I know that I just commented but I just noticed that people commented on june 13 and 11 (the day it came out) but then in come up with may 25 and stuff so...
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Title: LOVED IT!
Reviewed By: sesshy_lover261 On: June 13, 2006 21:34 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Its awsome plz oh plz continue it dont just forget about it even if I have to comment every single day tell you do.
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Reviewed By: Kierra W On: June 13, 2006 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! A cliff hanger??! What did Sesshomaru give Rin? Eek I'm dying to find out! ~Kia
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: June 13, 2006 15:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. I can not wait what the next chapter will bring. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: awesome story On: June 13, 2006 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a cliffy!! Please update soon. I absolutely love your story!
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Reviewed By: berlynn On: June 13, 2006 12:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it hurts me when u leave cliffies like that...so please write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: lal On: June 13, 2006 11:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story. And I'm of course glad that Sesshoumaru has come back.
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Title: ch 9 & 10
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: June 11, 2006 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am wondering what Sesshoumaru has gone to do? The story is proceeding nicely. Keep up the great work. Cynbad146
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