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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww!!!! Yay! I'm so happy for Itachi and Sasuke! And Kakashi and Harry are officially sorta together! Woot!!!! I love that pairing! I'm also happy that Naruto is being accepted and kinda like another little brother to Harry! :D Yay Sasuke has twice the protection of older bros!!! The only real problem now is Orochimaru and his stupid slippery self! I can't wait until his character is done away with! What's Utachi gonna do about the Akatsuki and will he ever be accepted back into the village? P.S.: Will Haku and Zabuza ever come back? Hope so!
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Reviewed By: Tee of Angels On: February 15, 2010 11:01 CST
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CUTTTEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 12:30 CDT
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Hmmm, long time since an update, but an interesting one, to say the least. Continue to update this one, will ya? It's interesting. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: seras_29 On: December 23, 2007 12:49 CST
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wow this fanfic is sooo awsome!!!! totally loved it. cant wait to read what happenes next sooo HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: Vescas
Reviewed By: Vesca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was short, but I liked it :D stupid council... stupid stupid..
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Reviewed By: L'Iconnu On: September 08, 2007 05:23 CDT
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Chapter 17, right near the end. The killing curse is "Avada Kedavra" not "Avada Kevada",just so you know.
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Reviewed By: Kiramaru On: August 21, 2007 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Avada Kevada." He stated firmly and the familiar green light rushed out and slammed into Gato who dropped lifelessly to the ground causing his men to freeze in shock. The men looked from their dead employer to the dark haired man standing confidently alongside two very famous shinobi and then turned tail and fled. "Well that was easy." Harry drawled earning to disbelieving looks from his friends. Wow, that was the best ending for a chapter I've ever seen, lol. Ten out of ten for you. By the moment, this story earns an eight out of ten from me (and that's because I'm still halfway and pairing is HarryKakashi, which doesn't really appeal to me. Let's see how you write it and then judge!)
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Title: Foaming at the mouth
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:33 CDT
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Love the story. I'm not a big fan of yaoi but I'm all for everyone's happy ending.
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Reviewed By: DarkAspects1819 On: May 17, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sobs* please write more it's so good. i love this crossover (by the way NaruSasu please)
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Title: INUYOKIA87@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 00:04 CDT
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This is well writen, though you do have a few typos. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: PrincessOfTheUnderworld On: May 02, 2007 17:26 CDT
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YAY you updated THANKYOU SO MUCH though i almost started crying when the cahpter ended oh and if you read my first revwiew i told you about how i needed a new desk, well i finally got one and i'm so happy so ya! anyways update again, soon to please Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: PrincessOfTheUnderworld On: April 21, 2007 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy F~~~ this is the best damn fanfic i have ever read and i can't wait to read the rest, oh by the way i think you should know that i need a new desk now because i was banging on it so hard after reading the last chapter that u just put up Oh and another thing UPDATE OR I WILL DIE SO PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE UUPPDDAATTEEDD SSOOOONN
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Reviewed By: SilverGreeneye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's just mean, leaving us hanging like that! It's an evil thing to do to us, your loyal readers, but we can't hate you for it because we love your works too much.
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh nooo. you cAn't just leave us hanging like that!.. you you cruel person you leaving it at such a cliffhanger!! Wimpers and gives puppy eyes.. I love this fic and I'm so glad he was working with Sakura as well. It rubbed me wrong in the manga that he never got her any help.. shoot even if it was the closet perv he still got Naruto some sort of help. I'm soo looking foward to when the next chapter is going to come out. heh I want to see how Harry handles the attack.
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Reviewed By: Gallia On: February 18, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wicked Awesome! I look foward to the next installment! >^.^
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 15:05 CST
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THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, enough of sounding like a fangirl (though it is fun at times, heh) and I am thankful for the new chapter, one I liek a lot. Heh, Manda, afraid of little old Snake Slayer Potter, I guess he's not so dumb afterall, heh. Anyway, glad for the update, I'd love to see more of your other fics too, later.
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...Harry definitely would have some words for Kakashi, although the same arguement that worked on Iruka would probably work on Harry also Kakashi could point out htat since Harry is not a ninja he wouldn't know how Sasuke related to the rest of the candidates. As for Oroshimaru, while he wouldn't be targeting Sasuke he would probably still be there to assassinate the Hokage, and cause as much trouble as he could. I love your stories keep up the could work.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 20:58 CDT
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I Love The Chapter:1 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Gundum M On: September 28, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the beet naruto and harry potter crossovers i've read.
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Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 12:21 CDT
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This is good (and this is the logged in version of mistylaugh). I was to busy to review when the update came so I'll review now. Wow so many chapters all at once! I know it's asking for a lot to hope that you update soon since you had so many updates in one day. But I truly am enjoying this story. (And I still think a triad between Kakashi, Iruka and Harry would be great :) So as a blanket statement I love your fics keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Honebarluv On: August 12, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that has to be the best Naruto/Potter crossover I have ever read. :Bows before the mighter writer: I hope that there is moer of this coming.. hmmm could they be trying to fing Haku? a new brother?:dances from one foot to the other: oooohh I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: July 19, 2006 19:30 CDT
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Alas! Naruto verse! I wonder what is going to happen now that Harry and Sasuke are going to Kanoha. They are going to Kanoha, right? I don't think you gave us the name of where they were heading. It will be an interesting concept of Harry's magic there, and how they will explain their version of chakura. My question is, are you going to make it the same thing? Or two different types of force all together. And while we are at it, since Sasuke cannot use Magic anymore, will he beable to use Chakura anymore? Or will he end up like Rock Lee and only beable to use Taijutsu? My last queston, how will Harry and Sasuke be recieved? Will anyone remember Sasuke before he left, and what about Harry? Will people be suspicious of him because he can do things without using hand seals? That's all I have for now. Thanks for putting chapters up! Ja!
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Reviewed By: DahChihuahua On: July 19, 2006 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKE!!! I LOVE NRUTO AND HARRY POTTER!!! Dah Chihuahua
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: July 19, 2006 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW two reviews from me in one day. I was going to say Sand but the terrain your in is all wrong for that. So maybe the village of the Mist? Not much is known except that they had barbaric graduation practices and Zabuza was from there. Also Kimimoro (one of Orochimaru's henchmen)was part of an attack on it. Hmm...Let's see what else...they didn't seem to have anybody in the final round of the Chunin exams. Their leader is the Mizukage. I think that's all I know about it. So anyway keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mistylaugh On: July 19, 2006 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY an update not only that but two updates!!! I enjoyed it and want to read more. Maybe an update on New Family next? I'll bribe your muse with cookies if necessary.
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Reviewed By: Ox King On: July 19, 2006 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on chapter 4 right now and read your authors notes. I like the Harry/Kakashi pairing. Also "It's been suggested that Sasuke be a Parselmouth and Harry have the Sharingan due to the adoption ceremony", I like that idea too. I can't wait to see how kick ass Harry will be fighting a ninja. Woohoo. Magic vs. Ninjetsu (sp?). Well I'm going back to the rest of the chapters. Thanks for taking the time to write this story for us readers.
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Reviewed By: anaki of the blood wolves (nli) On: July 06, 2006 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this is sad, but I love it, you have to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 08:57 CDT
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This is sad. While I was reading this chapter, I had thought that maybe you had Sasuke remember what had happened to his family and he had reverted back to his former self, but, alas, that was crushed. I am wonderng if any of the other Naruto characters are going to show up, or if it is just going to be Sasuke in th HP world. It's an interesting thought, but I don't think the Hokage or anyone would think to look for the little Uchiha in another world. I could be mistaken on that too. They spent a good deal of time in Japan, but you never did mention if the other Ninja were there. I mean chakura and magic seem to be very similar, but one can never tell what a writer is thinking unles it is in the works. I am just curious, and I hope you write some more soon. Ja!
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Title: Woo
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is fricken fantabulous. I love it, I really thought it would suck but its fricken incredible. Please hurry and update a.s.a.p. and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ang_Avalonis On: May 25, 2006 01:26 CDT
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This story is pretty cool. I hope that you continue with it and all. I love the whole thing about Sasuke being adotped by Harry and all. Sasuke is so cute being a toddler. Your story is really good and a great plot but I have to agree that some of the scenes are a little too fast and I have to agree that Sasuke's b-day is July 23th, 8 days before Harry's b-day. Also for the pair, I would say also that it would have to be Kakashi or/and Iruka because Kakashi is 14 years older than Sasuke and Iruka is 13 years older than Sasuke. Since in your story you have Harry being 13 years older as well then Iruka would be 16 like Harry and Kakashi would be 17. And since Malfoy Senior is dead and all what is going to happen between Draco and Harry. I know that you aren't going to pair them up but I was just wondering, are they going to be some sort of friends, or is Draco going to continue hating Harry and now hate him more because of his fathers death and all. Well I will be thrilled to see what you will come up in the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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