| "Synthetic Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 19:33 CDT
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he's a chickenshit
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I was reading, then I noticed something, there wasn't anymore chapters! Why is the chapters gone! hehe, get it, I was making fun of pirates of the C, I dont know how to spell it ^^ update peas!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww how can a puppy be ugly?? and i cant wait have a nephew or a neice... my sister (sister in law) is having a baby YAY lol anyways ooooooo Inuyasha knows Kagome loves him... :O awww too cute!! and they talked.... with out a fight... *YES* awww they make me feel fuzzy inside...... how chessy lol anyways GREAT job ^^
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 03:35 CDT
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FINALLY Inuyasha gets to know what's been eating Kagome! I hope they can try to be more mature about things from now on... and that we get to know what the big evil scheme's all about. Kagome has a purpose and her stay in her time was probably a benefit somehow, but...her hurt towards Inuyasha is her weakness. No good. Please do continue in the pace of your liking, I'll be reading you.
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Title: midknightrein
Reviewed By: midknightrien On: July 29, 2007 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story so whens the next chapter
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
locked together...... that will be hell.... lol GIVE HIM HELL KAGOME!!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: midknightrein On: July 27, 2007 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats was great hope to read the next chapters soon cant wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 26, 2007 22:53 CDT
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Haha she left the gag on. And that part about the loincloth, yowza.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 17:55 CDT
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Heh, did I say everything's going to settle? I stand corrected! I must say though Kagome did overdo it in this chapter - and so did Inuyasha. I hope they can get through to each other now, because the major evil of the jewel will get to Kagome otherwise. And why am I sensing Kouga's going to be the one helping Kagome realise her purpose in their time...? Heh, as I said, I really don't mind Kouga/Kag, I'm just hardcore Inu/Kag. And I'd go for Kouga/Kag than Sess/Kag anyday!!! How the hell did anyone come up with that pairing in the first place??? Pure fandome. Anyhow, please let them both be grownups about things now! Now they're really just children... I'll be reading you!
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Reviewed By: Sassa, unlogged yet again On: July 25, 2007 15:12 CDT
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Good going! Now they're all set, placed out, so now we can get to know why Kagome's there and how she and Inuyasha will make amends. I don't see Kagome as bitter, she's just making it clear where they stand. Now that Inuyasha seems to accept her rules I think they're going to get along better. I have never thought of Kouga and Kagome as a serious couple. Kouga is handsome and brave, but his way of showing love is... err... strange. Anyway, I wouldn't like a Kag/Kouga pairing since I'm hardcore Inu/Kag, but I wouldn't flame you about it if so. I'd be quite dissapointed though... but that's also a way of playin' the readers. *shrugs* Keep it up though!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o Koga and Kagome........ *looks around* wtf...... anyways 'Inuyasha has gone to the hills, dragging his Magdalena kicking and screaming' i LOVE THAT!!!! i couldnt stop laughing XD please update soon
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Title: Inuyasha and Kagome FOR-EV-ER!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU WHAT! How could you want an Koga and Kagome pairing in the seiries they aren't right for each other...well enyways you better not make this one like that I'll get sooooooooo made and be leave you me no one wants to see me when I'm ticked....(I kinda feel bad for my little brother he is like what Jaken is to Sesshoumaru......that is a liveing stress ball....hehe.....Love to make him squeal in main...*Laugh evily*).....So ya gota update soon this is crazy man...XD....I think I going crazy....whyyyyyyyy......so update soon meoh.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 01:52 CDT
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another wonderful chapter from you i really do like your story so please keep up the good work and i will await the next chapter
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 23, 2007 23:42 CDT
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I like Kouga too, but not as a permanent love interest for Kagome. He is such great comic relief. AND THOSE EYES!!! woohoo!
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Reviewed By: frostshake(nsi) On: July 23, 2007 20:18 CDT
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I loved Emilio's message, that was classic. And how great is it that Kagome is a stronger person now than she was before. I almost expected her to submit to Inuyasha and forgive his mistakes. He really had no right to decide to push Kagome away, even if it was for her safety. After all Kagome should be in charge of making the decisions in HER life.
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