| "Synthetic Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yep, I did right to favourite it! So Kagome's going to be a fighter, and she even seems destined to be! Last time around, Inuyasha was destined to be her protector. Now it's like fate has written him off... the question is, does he accept that? When he returns and hears of Kagomes reappearence, won't he long for the friendship and closeness again? After all, life on the sea isn't exactly fighting and the sea can never be a forest. I think he will want to stay - but there's no obvious need for him anymore...Oh please, a bit of angst, if just for a chapter, before Inuyasha wins back Kagomes affection! Please? Or... NO! Nono, not a SessKag, no! Please no? Or perhaps no pairing at all? Just Kags?
|
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my gosh Inuyasha Isn't going to leave with out finding out that Kagome is back right?.....He would never leave after he found that she was back....Its just not right she is finaly back....He loves her right??....Even if that B-och had them seperated....gurr I'm glad she is dead but it is good that she opened to well again...I guess...Ya know it was kinda strange how that plot kinda changed the way it did first they are at the castil and Kagome is in the villige and then Inuyasha is on a different contenent seperated be miles upon miles for ocean.....at first I though it was a different manga but I guess this is what is going to lead to the climax.....well I still can't wait untill you update.....please update soon...as soon as posible if you can....Nyuka
|
Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. I can't believe I almost passed over it! Inuyasha as a merchant..... priceless.If you want to get more reviews try to upload the story on fanfiction.net
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww me LIKEY!!!! im going to add you to my favs :P im dieing to see how Inuyasha and Kagome met :P and is it going to be long?? anyways hope you update soon ^^
|
Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Unexpected twist there with the last chapter! Normally when someone is away, their story gets re-telled after returning and reunion. Nice to know that Inuyasha's life isn't all misery just because he doesn't have Kikyo or Kagome no more. I mean... what kind of difference have the girls made if he's alone yet again as soon as they are gone? That's why I think Kagome's and Inuyasha's reunion this time won't be as obvious as in so many other fictions. I think I'd better favourite this and see what's going to happen...
|
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this. IT's good. I have you on my favs.
|
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story.. I always want to read more and wish the chapters were longer!! haha. I am SO excited to see what happens when Kagome and Inuyasha meet!! AHH!! I am dying of anticipation. I enjoy reading your fic and I can't wait for an update. Great job!! And.. it's cute that Sango and Miroku have kids :o) Aww..
|
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww....what a nice reunion...sniff*....To bad Inuyasha hasn't comein to the picture yet....which reminds me...Thankyou for answering my question.....I'm glad its not because he is avoiding her....:D....This is realy turning in to a good story....I hope that you can up date soon I love to read this fic.....:D....Nyuka
|
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating I love your story.....What is Sango going to say....and that fox that Kagome met in the forest befor she left, for some reason I can't help think that is Shippo In his fox form...is it? Inuyasha where is he wouldn't he smell her as soon as she came through the well, or does he not want to she her...that would be sad but may be it because he is affaid she doesn't want to see him...which apparantly she dosn't I just wish they could all be happy.....Please up date soon...Nyuka
|
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story very much. :o) I think you have a very intriguing plot, and I can't wait to read more! I am very interested to see what will happen when Kagome meets Inuyasha. I think you are doing a fabulous job! Can't wait to read more! I am adding this to my faves!
|
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice Chapter.....I loved it....the only thing that could make it better if there was another chapter...and another chapter...and another chapter....ahh that would be nice I want to read more......This is koo try to update like every day and I'll be happy...:D....This story is on my favorits list so I don't miss any thing to I can read the entire story....XD....I can't wait for the next chapter.....Please update soon....>.
|
Reviewed By: northernmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I respect that you've set up your plot with a careful attention to detail. I like the little hints that you drop without really giving anything away. Looking forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooowwwwwwwwwww....This is so koo....The blank pages of the book the unfinished pages of Kagomes life....no one can see their own fate....oooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww......Kagome has to go back....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... you got to up date soooooooonnnnnnn......OMG......I just have to read more you just let it hang there....please up date soon Like have a new Chapter tomarro so I can read it this story is deffently get on my fav's so I don't miss an up date...>.
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more please
|
Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start. I love your writing style and how you leave us wanting to find out more. This first chapter is bittersweet and has a lot of angst. Well done. Snow
|
| Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] |
