| "Forbidden Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: Forbidden Kagome
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: September 02, 2006 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome(sp)story.
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Reviewed By: Night of Fakirs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 16:25 CDT
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sota should be with a human kirara
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: August 16, 2006 05:41 CDT
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uwa... you finally updated. nice update^^
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz243 On: August 14, 2006 23:43 CDT
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Forgive my mistake in my previous review, but it does seem as if you've made an error in your fic. First you note Souta as being 6'5", then 4'6". Just something small you might want to take a look at yourself. Another thing I wish to mention, I find it interesting that you've chosen to make Kagome a Forbidden Child, being both ice and fire demon, considering that it has been seen before, having made Souta one as well does make things interesting. I'm quite interested just were you take this. Just one last bit of commentary, it isn't necessary to describe a characters clothing or appearance in great detail, if there's too much detail it can take away from the story. Perhaps commenting on their clothing whenever it deviates from that norm is appropriate, but when dealing with characters that others come to this site to read about too much description will over do it, just as author notes in the middle of the story will break the flow. I hope I haven't been too much of a bother, and I really have been enjoying your story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz243 On: August 14, 2006 23:29 CDT
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I like the concept that you're dealing with, I just have to point something out though. Realistically, just what 12 year old boy is going to be standing at 6'5"? I can believe a 14/15 year old boy standing at 6 feet, but 6'5" is a stretch for most. I really hope you don't mind me pointing this out.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:59 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:59 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:00 CDT
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FINALLY! WOO-HOO! Anyways, I was hoping that they would start their training in this chaptre, I hope it starts on the next. I also hope that it wont be as long till the next chapter , hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink . . .lol
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Reviewed By: GoodGirlJay On: August 01, 2006 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good stroy. i think it roxs and that you are a really good writer. hope you can update soon. can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: thesimsun994 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 16:16 CDT
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good story so far, as for souta with the pairings i think he should go with Yukina because their both ice apparitions and update soon plz! :)
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 03, 2006 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it, and i cant wait till you update!!!!! it would be funny to watch souta steal yukina from kuwabara, so i vote for a souta/yukina pairing
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 13:41 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 10:59 CDT
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P.S. h/k n do w/e with Sota...lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 10:57 CDT
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ooo, me liky very muchy...lol...plz update soony...byezzzy
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Reviewed By: I drop dead when pigs fly On: July 01, 2006 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I like this fic alot and you have a great story going so I just had to review. My vote is on SoutaxYukina since its a good match and they would look good together.
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