| "Everlasting Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: not bad
Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not many fics have shadow as a main without any of the others and to make a story out of that is hard with his unknown past and all and well kudos to you cause what you've done is hard believe me i've tried it anyway keep it up
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Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goodie goodie goodie greatness! i loved it! its scary how much we hav in common tho. my oc came from the streets too, only she had been there since she was a baby. and i, hav decided that im gonna match her up w/shadow cuz in the origional series shadow was the only "single" guy. anyway loved tha fic. write's block sucks. and c is for kookie!
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Reviewed By: Mel Meiko Mei Ling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
WAIIIEEE!!! This was nioce!! I know the writer's block feeling @_@ ive been hit with it a lot too. This story's goin along nicely ^^ YEAH!
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Title: Melliechanchanheehee
Reviewed By: Mel Meiko Mei Ling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome flow of events. It was kinda cute and scary when Haley slipped but she just laughed it off. And Shadow cared so much! ^^ Great depiction of characters. Keep goin! But at your own time and pace ^^ No pressure.
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Reviewed By: not logged in kattx On: August 02, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
well, work on how these two mingle for starters, then head it from there. at least, that's what I would do.
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Reviewed By: MellieMeikochanchanchan On: July 08, 2006 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWWEEEEEEEEESOOOOOOOMENEESS!! Im so glad you updated!! WHOOHOO!! You've really got the personalities down. I can really feel for Shadow >=3 Excellent
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Reviewed By: mmmmmmELMEI On: June 11, 2006 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heey dont worry! ^^ Do your best and don't rush anything
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Reviewed By: Watch For Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude. That. Was. Fantastic! Really awesome job! I gotta say, I am now going to check out your other stories. ^_^ Seriously, this was AWESOME! kk, BYEZ! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Melliechan nah meeean On: June 01, 2006 00:03 CDT
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Wow this is really interesting. You're always improving everytime you write, its amazing and wonderful ^^ Lots of inspiring. I guess Shadow was really interested in knowing more about Haley huh?? >=3 Rouge's comments were funny because she really would say things like that lol Awesome story. ^^
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