| "Trudging Through Spiritual Malaise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 16:44 CST
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this sounds like it's going to be a good story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 11:09 CST
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i love how you've donet his story and i so do wish you would update it. I hope you haven't lost ur muse or inspiration for this story and we can look forward to another chatper soon ^^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 06:51 CDT
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this sounds like it's going to be a good story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: July 26, 2007 00:19 CDT
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this rocks so far!!!! why dont you update?????? plz plz plz plz PLZ update soon luv jenna xoxox
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Title: Weep (continued)
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(For some reason my revie got cut off) It's wonderful how well the story is moving. I wish that you would update soon, but I understand how fickle a muse's attention span can be, or how intense. Please update as soon as you possibly can. Your faithful story follower, Crystal :3
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Title: Weep
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyes overflow with the beauty written in this story T-T. I love how it slowly brings all the characters in while keeping their unique personalities intact. How delicately they interact together, and yet how strongly they are effected by each other. The emotions just fill each paragraph. >-
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Title: READ
Reviewed By: graverose On: May 19, 2007 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! it's been forever since you updated! I love your so please write! write! Write! Yours truly graverose! :)
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Reviewed By: lillylady On: April 15, 2007 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! Please updated soon. I know you haven't for a while but it is beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome i can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 08:27 CDT
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This is an awsome fic!! I want desperatly to know what happens in the future of this fic and what the pairings will be... perhaps Kurama and the others (I have a slight Kurama fettish) come up to the store when the sense the strange energy and barge into the store.... and that's when Kagome places a barrier around everyone in the story (guess who? you guessed it... the big lug and his sister) and takes the defencive, telling them that if they only came to cause trouble then they should just go home... after all she is Kagome... Until next time, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: CrescentDragoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:06 CST
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I just wanted to let you know that I love your story. I think that your plot is really interesting, and your words are well written. I would greatly appreciate it if you were to update and/or finish writing this story soon. I can't wait. I await your updates. ~CrescentDragoness~
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Reviewed By: Zarisa On: December 26, 2006 17:08 CST
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This is awesome. Please update soon.
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Title: Ch. 2 (pt 2)
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 21:19 CST
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oh, and i totally 4got 2 tell u, i think a Hiei/Kagome pairing would be very good, b/c Kuwabara said she felt lyk 'Home' and hiei needs 2 feel lyk that. Kurama has his mother, and u could pair him up with Shizuru that would work out pretty good, i think. :) -Mitsuko
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome chapter, and i hope 2 read more soon! :D very cool at how Kagome easily gave Shizuru the job, and how Kuwabara said she felt lyk home! Hope 2 read more from u soon! -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: Phelin On: December 19, 2006 19:17 CST
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Please.. continue, is different and refreshing
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Reviewed By: moo cow/-insert evil laugh here- On: December 15, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you have to update soon!!! it would be simply evil not to!!
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ain interesting fic! It's different because you had Kagome meet Kuwabara first. I'm curious to find out what happened to her family and friends; and also what roles the YYH guys will play in her life. I hope to read more from you soon! :)
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad your muse has returned (even if it's temporary). This story is unfolding beautiful, I can't wait to see the relationship between these characters grow. I can't wait to see Shizuru's impression on meeting Kagome! Keep up the excellent work, I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update soon.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Thanks for updateing. I think this story is Blooming beautifully.(well, you know what I mean, right?) Update soon.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan On: December 15, 2006 16:12 CST
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Woo! You updated! Arigato! Great chappy!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:09 CST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! :P :):P :)
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: S.S. Sakura On: October 12, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You have to update please, I'm begging you, I'm down on my knees here. Please please please update I just gotta know what happens next the suspence is killing me! Thanks lots in advance!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly have a way with words. I knew from the minute he walked through the door it was Kuwbara- it just shows you how excellent your descriptions are! I'm really intreguied to see where this is going, and who you'll pair Kagome up with. I don't think it'll be Kuwbara, simply because of his love for Yukina (though you could prove me wrong!), so I'm predicting Hiei, as you mentioned him as the one calling Kuwbara a baka- again, just one of my predictions that will undoubtabley be proven wrong. Update when you can, and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Grav rose On: September 03, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Grave rose On: August 24, 2006 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!:)
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: WhiteUsagi On: August 23, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats wonderful! please write more. i love all your stories.Ive read the ones on a single spark too. Youre really good.
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Reviewed By: MidnightRain (nl) On: August 19, 2006 21:59 CDT
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I love the way this story starts, please update soon!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 13:19 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! That was so nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You threw me alil when he started talking about his 'special sister' I thought it was gonna be an OC.... whooppsssiiieeee...lol... ma bad... Plzz update soon!
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is purely one of the best dang fics i've ever had the pleasure to read! I loved it, and hope you shall update soon. also, i crave a good Hiei/Kagome fic, and wish for you to place them together, though Kurama(Youko)/Kagome is alright as well! ^^ And, I agree with Haywire Hakaze/vulcana/MistressoftheMask/Guardian Angel Of ALL Time. Kazuma-kun is not an idiot, he is slightly slow. I have friends like that, and they are good people. I shall leave you for now, but *quickly reverts to childish self* here's a chibi hiei to keep you company. and if you don't like him, i'll trade for a chibi kurama! *huggles own chibi hiei, who grumbles angrily* ^_________________________________^ -Mitsuko
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