| "Trudging Through Spiritual Malaise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Grave rose On: August 02, 2006 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story and I hope you update soon. :)
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! It's DarkianMoon again, I may have written a review for this story on adultfanfiction.net. But I am going to review again because I like your writing so much. Wonderful work as always, you are now on my obsession list. I admit that I am curious to see which lucky guy gets paired up with Kagome. I am not going to complain about who gets paired up with Kagome. You are one of the small few that don't bash Kazuma when writing. Yes, he may not be the sexy delicious piece of kitsune man-meat like Kurama. Or dark as Hiei, and he doesn't really have the cute boyish looks like Yusuke does. But Kazuma is special in his own way. Isn't it said that the inside of the person is what counts? I just hate it when people bash him, Kazuma may be slow, but he isn't sure as hell stupid. *sighs* I had to get that out. I'm sorry about my rant and long review. I tend to get like that sometimes, anyways continue doing your good work. Bye! ^_~
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Reviewed By: TwiLiteVixen (@ff.net) On: July 13, 2006 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing, as usual. Just one thing... *falls on knees and begs* Please not a Kagome Kuwabara pairing! *puppy eyes*
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome start to the fic. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens with everyone. Why Kagome does not have a family any more, what happen with the Inu gang. Think Kuwabara should become like a brother to Kagome. Pair Kagome with Kurama or Hiei.
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: June 16, 2006 18:59 CDT
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make it a kagome & kurama(youko)story!!!! it's a good story please write more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: MisstressoftheMasks On: June 14, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved I hope you write more and soon. You don't find many oringal yyh/iy crossovers but you seem to have one. I also love and enjoy the fact that you did not make Kuwabara into a weakling and idoit. Keep writing I am waiting in suppense for the next chatper and promise to reveiw for everyone you write.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: June 10, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the depiction of Kuabara in this. It is different from what most people would write but is entirely true to character. I also like the depiction of Kagome. It looks like she has matured a bit
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 18:10 CDT
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i liked it i really hope you do update soon
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
yet another spectacular start to what i'm sure is going to be another amazing piece of writing. so much delicious foreshadowing...i love it! and i'm truly curious as to whom you're going to end up pairing with kagome. well, whoever it is, i'm sure you'll do an exemplary job with their relationship. keep those chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Ahrairah On: June 05, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good, update as soon as you can please ^.^
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I mean just WOW... Words cannot express how awed I am by this single chapter. The way it was put together, the way that these two characters interacted, the way they stayed in character! GENIUS!!! I beg of you please update as soon as you are able. Please T-T
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Reviewed By: SpazzzFox13 On: June 04, 2006 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your writing style! Keep up the good work and please update soon! (P.S: I personally think this should be either a Yusuke Kagome pairing or a Hiei Kagome) ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 01:43 CDT
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Wow. A new couple hath sprouted before mine eyes! ^_^ I love you. Seriously. Your adaptive quality and ability to fit any man with Kagome is astounding. Not only that, but your writing prowess. I'm blown away by the sheer beauty of your work; you never cease to amaze me. The only thing I worry about is the completion of your on-going works, but I have the utmost faith in you. There's no way you'd let your fans down by teasing them with such wonders and leaving them hanging at the edge of a cliff with no hope of an update. That and I can tell you enjoy writing, so you're not going to give up any time soon. At any rate, I'm going to stop rambling and get to bed. It's nearly two AM here; I only stayed up so late after work to help my sister with her costume and then read your newest development. So, I bid thee adieu. Until next time.
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