| "Trudging Through Spiritual Malaise" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: MisstressoftheMasks On: June 14, 2006 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved I hope you write more and soon. You don't find many oringal yyh/iy crossovers but you seem to have one. I also love and enjoy the fact that you did not make Kuwabara into a weakling and idoit. Keep writing I am waiting in suppense for the next chatper and promise to reveiw for everyone you write.
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: June 10, 2006 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the depiction of Kuabara in this. It is different from what most people would write but is entirely true to character. I also like the depiction of Kagome. It looks like she has matured a bit
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 18:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it i really hope you do update soon
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 16:52 CDT
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yet another spectacular start to what i'm sure is going to be another amazing piece of writing. so much delicious foreshadowing...i love it! and i'm truly curious as to whom you're going to end up pairing with kagome. well, whoever it is, i'm sure you'll do an exemplary job with their relationship. keep those chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Ahrairah On: June 05, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was pretty good, update as soon as you can please ^.^
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I mean just WOW... Words cannot express how awed I am by this single chapter. The way it was put together, the way that these two characters interacted, the way they stayed in character! GENIUS!!! I beg of you please update as soon as you are able. Please T-T
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Reviewed By: SpazzzFox13 On: June 04, 2006 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your writing style! Keep up the good work and please update soon! (P.S: I personally think this should be either a Yusuke Kagome pairing or a Hiei Kagome) ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 01:43 CDT
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Wow. A new couple hath sprouted before mine eyes! ^_^ I love you. Seriously. Your adaptive quality and ability to fit any man with Kagome is astounding. Not only that, but your writing prowess. I'm blown away by the sheer beauty of your work; you never cease to amaze me. The only thing I worry about is the completion of your on-going works, but I have the utmost faith in you. There's no way you'd let your fans down by teasing them with such wonders and leaving them hanging at the edge of a cliff with no hope of an update. That and I can tell you enjoy writing, so you're not going to give up any time soon. At any rate, I'm going to stop rambling and get to bed. It's nearly two AM here; I only stayed up so late after work to help my sister with her costume and then read your newest development. So, I bid thee adieu. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: June 03, 2006 00:21 CDT
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Hey this is a really great story i really like it so far and i cant wait to see what happends next so please update it really soon thanks tootles.
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Title: WRITE
Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 00:18 CDT
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WRITE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: June 02, 2006 06:42 CDT
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wow. im liking this. i like the somewhat mysterious feel of how you write the story. it keeps it interesting^^ keep it up
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 03:15 CDT
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cool.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 02, 2006 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...I love how you started it, I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's bound to be great. Keep up the good work!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA (just not logged in) On: June 02, 2006 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it please update with a new chapter soon!
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