| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 01:17 EDT
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OMG! HAHAHA That was awesome! YAY for the fantastic update! I still can't get over sesshoumaru's thoughts... or his action with his fluffy boa thing, lol. Can't wait for an update! this chapter was HILARIOUS!
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Reviewed By: burningbritelyone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 11:42 EDT
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I almost never write reviews, but I was compelled. I'm not a Sess/Kag shipper; practically ever. Most writers using that couple situate them in highly unlikely circumstances, make Inuyasha a total asshole, make Sesshoumaru entirely out of character, or some combination thereof. You, however, have somehow mastered it. I wouldn't say I'm converted, but damn is the option looking good. Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru (both in this fic and your others) is so incredibly dirty and yet entirely believable based on canon personalities. Beyond that, you write comedy very well. I seriously burst out laughing when Sesshoumaru preened for Kagome. That was priceless. I guess all I have left is to congratulate you on a plotline and characters well executed, and I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Nilee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru as pervert; that is a very original concept.
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was an awesome chapter and I've truly enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to see how the next unfolds. Excellent job!!! Bravo!
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: AW555 (ashley) On: August 30, 2006 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update as normal XD. I can't wait till the next one! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Shaynie M. On: August 23, 2006 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! "I will take you, and you will like it." Funny, but it also gave me goosebumps, LOL. Brilliant! Can't wait for more of this!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: August 18, 2006 23:25 EDT
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I'm sorry, that was just waaay too fucking awesome
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Title: Panty sniffing?!
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girly, this is one of the most original (and halarious) things I have enjoyed in a long time! I think I will reccommend this in my group! Update soon, please!!!!!!!! Ps...The way...you think...the wit, style, etc..seems familiar. Do you have another pseudonyme (SP).
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Reviewed By: izzyco2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 02:34 EDT
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I am so glad that you were thinking about me when you wrote the extra part to that chapter. It put me on the edge of my seat wanting more! It was very entertaining. I love how she is back and forth in showing what she wants. There are so many possibilities as to where you could take this and I can only guess. But I know that no matter where it goes, it will be good.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:51 EDT
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heh, i love this story! fantastic chapter, funny as always! can't wait for an update! keep up the great writing!!!!!
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Title: A goat demon?
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The yellow bag met its demise at the mouth of a goat demon?! RFLMAO. I had to comment on that... I love the story already!...now I have to read the rest of the chapter, lol.
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Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was some funny stuff! Sesshomaru flipping his hair and catching the light just right. Oh that was hilarious! And like so many young girls (myself included once upong a time), she chickened out at the last minute and ran like a scared rabbit! LOL! Poor Kagome. It looks like Sesshomaru may now consider her a challenge, and he isn't one to back down from a challenge! I look forward to more of this delicious dose of 'Cereal' goodness. Great job!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL! Kagome peeping in on Sesshoumaru and then he makes theft with her panties! The best EVER! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Leira and Frooky On: August 15, 2006 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! so fun! and the whole "That smug, vain, self-absorbed excuse for an overgrown poodle" thing can i use that i LOVE IT! notty, notty Sesshy he went on a panty rade ;3 this rocks my socks and thank you for sending out this update. KUDOS TO YOU! Leira ^.~
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Title: New chap!
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* Totally hysterical. I can't WAIT for the next chapter. And Inuyasha with the sour cream & onion dip?! WTF?!?!? Oh man, I laughed SOOOO hard. Great job!
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