| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Panty sniffing?!
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girly, this is one of the most original (and halarious) things I have enjoyed in a long time! I think I will reccommend this in my group! Update soon, please!!!!!!!! Ps...The way...you think...the wit, style, etc..seems familiar. Do you have another pseudonyme (SP).
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Reviewed By: izzyco2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 02:34 EDT
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I am so glad that you were thinking about me when you wrote the extra part to that chapter. It put me on the edge of my seat wanting more! It was very entertaining. I love how she is back and forth in showing what she wants. There are so many possibilities as to where you could take this and I can only guess. But I know that no matter where it goes, it will be good.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:51 EDT
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heh, i love this story! fantastic chapter, funny as always! can't wait for an update! keep up the great writing!!!!!
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Title: A goat demon?
Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The yellow bag met its demise at the mouth of a goat demon?! RFLMAO. I had to comment on that... I love the story already!...now I have to read the rest of the chapter, lol.
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Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was some funny stuff! Sesshomaru flipping his hair and catching the light just right. Oh that was hilarious! And like so many young girls (myself included once upong a time), she chickened out at the last minute and ran like a scared rabbit! LOL! Poor Kagome. It looks like Sesshomaru may now consider her a challenge, and he isn't one to back down from a challenge! I look forward to more of this delicious dose of 'Cereal' goodness. Great job!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL! Kagome peeping in on Sesshoumaru and then he makes theft with her panties! The best EVER! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Leira and Frooky On: August 15, 2006 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! so fun! and the whole "That smug, vain, self-absorbed excuse for an overgrown poodle" thing can i use that i LOVE IT! notty, notty Sesshy he went on a panty rade ;3 this rocks my socks and thank you for sending out this update. KUDOS TO YOU! Leira ^.~
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Title: New chap!
Reviewed By: Mrs_Sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* Totally hysterical. I can't WAIT for the next chapter. And Inuyasha with the sour cream & onion dip?! WTF?!?!? Oh man, I laughed SOOOO hard. Great job!
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Title: ZOMG
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is pure awesome. Sesshoumaru sniffing Kagome's panties freaked me a bit, you know, with the mental imagery and all. I love KagSess fics that actually make me laugh and don't make me want to stab myself with overwhelming fluff or angst. This fic is truly a gem.
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Reviewed By: WhiteRose-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 08:56 EDT
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This was a very amusing chappie! hahaha! Looks like Kagome will have a very hard time playing hard to get w/ Sess esp. since he knows that she wants him! And what did Sess take anyway? Was it a pair of undies, a thong perhaps? Can't wait to see what happens next so keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie! :P
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: karla On: August 15, 2006 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! haha give him a run for his money kagome!!!! please update soon!! i can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved his attempts at seducing kagome…how dare she not bask in the honor! lol I can just imagine the hair and the tossing… that was funny!! I enjoy reading tense chemistry, suspense… all the good stuff, between characters and you are really good at portraying those feelings. The last scene was very hot! Oh! Inuyasha thinking about dressing up kagome in… that was just wrong! I read this chapter right after you updated, I should've delayed reading so that I didn't have to wait in suspense until the next one… oh well… can't wait for chapter 7!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 23:33 EDT
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Good filler chapter...I can't wait for the next update and some more action. I absolutely love hearing Sesshoumaru's thoughts!
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! I have truly enjoyed reading this and I love the humor and the sexual tension you have going. Truly awesome job!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter to see what unfolds. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 00:59 EDT
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LMAO! that was awesome! can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the great writing!
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