| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: SouthWest Dingy On: June 10, 2006 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Original, and clever! Continue? YES PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 05, 2006 23:28 CDT
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I sooo get the plot too. Whatever decoder she gets, she can understand the thoughts/words of that demon. Cat demon ring-Kirara's a cat demon. Waaay to original to pass up!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: June 05, 2006 23:27 CDT
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I think you should. This sounds just too funny to pass up.
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Reviewed By: Cesilie On: June 05, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please!
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Reviewed By: *psycho On: June 04, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue. This story has promise.
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Title: Good so far!
Reviewed By: Ashley (AW555) On: June 04, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:26 CDT
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You have to continue this...I sooo have to know who's voice that is!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea and the story's pretty good thus far. I know all about cereal-box-treasures, lol. My kids were crazy about em. Reminds me of Cracker Jacks. Keep it up, this is good. :D
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Reviewed By: InuChicka07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd really like to see more of this story. This is going into my favorites. Its different, different is good, we need a story that has a plot we haven't seen before, this is it. Keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting and fun idea for a story! Please continue it! I look foward to the updates! -Lyz (Vagabond)
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 11:18 CDT
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Ooo, please continue. I like what you have so far and I would like to see how you would continue it. ~~Ang
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Reviewed By: ReincarnatedCat46 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I think you should continue. I'd read it. And yes, a love story in itself can be good. Like maybe differences in a relationship or struggles between the couples would help it out. But add a little fighting action once in awhile.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 04, 2006 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pssh! and what's wrong with just a love story? this is way cute, difinitely going in my favorites so you better update, or you'll be wasting precious space!
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the idea is original, yet the plot seems undecided. with naraku gone you need to have something there, not just a love story. there needs to be an actual plot, like an enemy, or something entirely out of the ordinary. like giant evil bananas. or evil persocons. u kno, something real. but i like it, i'd like a continuation, because you have everything in order, and you seem to have something going there. even if its small still. go for it!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 07:08 CDT
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I for one would not mind a continuation of this story. The idea of Kirara speaking is not unique, but you certainly have a novel approach to it.
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