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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea and the story's pretty good thus far. I know all about cereal-box-treasures, lol. My kids were crazy about em. Reminds me of Cracker Jacks. Keep it up, this is good. :D
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Reviewed By: InuChicka07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd really like to see more of this story. This is going into my favorites. Its different, different is good, we need a story that has a plot we haven't seen before, this is it. Keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting and fun idea for a story! Please continue it! I look foward to the updates! -Lyz (Vagabond)
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 12:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ooo, please continue. I like what you have so far and I would like to see how you would continue it. ~~Ang
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Reviewed By: ReincarnatedCat46 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I think you should continue. I'd read it. And yes, a love story in itself can be good. Like maybe differences in a relationship or struggles between the couples would help it out. But add a little fighting action once in awhile.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: June 04, 2006 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pssh! and what's wrong with just a love story? this is way cute, difinitely going in my favorites so you better update, or you'll be wasting precious space!
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the idea is original, yet the plot seems undecided. with naraku gone you need to have something there, not just a love story. there needs to be an actual plot, like an enemy, or something entirely out of the ordinary. like giant evil bananas. or evil persocons. u kno, something real. but i like it, i'd like a continuation, because you have everything in order, and you seem to have something going there. even if its small still. go for it!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:08 EDT
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I for one would not mind a continuation of this story. The idea of Kirara speaking is not unique, but you certainly have a novel approach to it.
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