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| "Cereal Box Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 ] | Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 09:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the idea is original, yet the plot seems undecided. with naraku gone you need to have something there, not just a love story. there needs to be an actual plot, like an enemy, or something entirely out of the ordinary. like giant evil bananas. or evil persocons. u kno, something real. but i like it, i'd like a continuation, because you have everything in order, and you seem to have something going there. even if its small still. go for it!
| Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 08:08 EDT
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I for one would not mind a continuation of this story. The idea of Kirara speaking is not unique, but you certainly have a novel approach to it.
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