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Title: wow-Chapter 12
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with carlet. I thought this chapter was loaded with depth. In my somewhat checkered past, it's possible I've found myself in similar situation(s). The first time is rarely the best time-at least that's what I tell myself-and I think you depicted a possible scenario with a great deal of accuracy. Ouch, in fact. My heart just breaks for Kagome. I think it was very gutsy of you to write this.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot! Awesome chapter! I absolutely loved it! I'm telling you...these characters have so much depth and body..and actual issues to sort out...it really makes the story come to life. Pwor Kagome! First times have a tendency to suck :(...Should be interesting to see what happens next..for once...I haven't got a clue!
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read this latest chapter but the third paragraft is missing. Just thought you should know. I love the story though.
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Reviewed By: playing with demons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 15:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story but it was a little difficult to read past all the inserted 'author id' blurbs. I'm assuming that is just a media miner glitch ;) When the well was blown up it seemed like it happened out of the 'blue' and was a little confusing. The small paragraph about rin's death and now kagome's 'mating' with kouga all just seemed to fly past and is contrary to the more even pace of your earlier chapters. Is that just because of the shift in the future/past tense you were writing in? Anyways, I love your work. You are quite talented!! :)
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Title: Great Update
Reviewed By: ashtheflash On: November 12, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, I know Kagome wont stay with Kouga. What's going to happen next?
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 14:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, an awesome chapter. I'm truly enjoying this little story and love to see updates in my email for it. Bravo, as always on a awesome job! Can't wait to see what unfolds in the next chapter. :D ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 01:40 EST
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GAH! you can't leave it like that!!!!!! *reader is having panic attack* plllleeeeaaasseee update this wonderful and hilarious story!!! and i love how inuyasha turned out.... strangely im not surprised in the least bit, it suits him, lol
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Title: okayyyy
Reviewed By: adamjj On: October 30, 2006 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okayyy!! well I think you are a good writer but I am an avid Inuyasha/ Kagome relationship only fan and therefore don't like that it is Sessy/Kag relationship. Although Inu agreed to the stupid bet, he seems to care more about Kag than Sess. After all, Sessy just wants to lust after Kag and "deflower" her in front of Inuyasha for spite after 500 years. Boy! that is the start of a real good loving relationship for Kagome. Your portrayal of Sessy as a self-centered, lustful, revengefuldemon is right on. But making Inuyasha into an oversexed , lustful playboy doesn't seem just right and is out of character. He just seems too shy to speak his mind throughout the story and now he ends up being a playboy? Nahhh!!! It just doesn't sit well. Well that's all I gotta say. thanks for the story. J
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 02:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know where to start… it was certainly a twist to the story. I had to read some parts again because I couldn't believe it. I am still confused about the explosion and the thing Kagome saw just before. It is very exciting how you brought the characters to the present/future (?). I didn't expected at all. I have always wondered what that would be like. I love how you transition from one paragraph to another. I was so disappointed about what Inuyasha has become but I can understand it. I wanted to know what Sesshoumaru would wear (just curious). I was surprised Kagome would ask Kouga about Ayame instead of Sesshoumaru or Inuyasha. Overall, I enjoyed how this chapter turned out. As usual you are a great writer. I am so eager to find out what is going to happen. I'm going to drive myself crazy if I can't find out soon.
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: October 29, 2006 23:37 EST
Comment/Review:
Awesome :3
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: carlet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha! Now that was a twist I certainly didn't expect! OMG I lost it when Sesshoumaru opens the obviously aged and mysterious box which contains *dramatic music* Kagome's panties. Bah...Now I'm all anxious for the next chappy ...darn it >.<
I am so jealous of your perfect grammer..I could just...PINCH it. GAh! Great work :) Scarlet
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: Allyouneedislove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Thanks for updating so quickly! A very funny chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: sempai19 On: October 28, 2006 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!!! Get them back together.
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Reviewed By: keke [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading this chapter was a nice little break from midterms. You manage to keep the story steamy while maintaining its quality. I love Akago's quick comebacks, I hope to see more from her. The last scene was very interesting… curious to find out what is going to happen… so many questions… I guess I'll just have to wait.
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Reviewed By: zohar On: October 17, 2006 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your fic. Please don't leave it unfinished as it is such a great story so far. Looking forwards to the future chapters...
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