| "Under the Blood Red Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 23:12 CDT
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Ah... a cliffhanger. Lovely Ces. I like those :). Nice update by the way, I read it as promised! By the way, since you've been on somewhat of a writing spree it seems, (all those stories!!!) I figured I might as well order you to read mine too ;)! Teehee... I've got a bunch of one-shots up, mostly all about Sasuke and/or Itachi and/or Orochimaru. But yeah, I'd appriciate it greatly if you read and reviewed mine too! Pretty please? ^.^ Love you Ces... :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 23:23 CDT
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Yeah u updated . Cool that was funny.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 00:10 CDT
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So she's engaged to him eh? Cool. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 23:02 CDT
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PLEASE WRITE NEXT CHAPPIE SOON. I LOVE THIS STORY AND IT'S BEEN ALMOST 2 MONTHS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED.
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Title: Under The Blood Red Sun
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 04, 2006 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY ITS SO COOL AND AMAZING,KEEP UP THEE GOOD WORK.
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Reviewed By: lemonskittlez On: June 27, 2006 01:06 CDT
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This is good. Update soon. But I would wounder, maybe Kagome skouldn't have been found out but told them herself. It is good the way you did it though. Just call me drama queen. Also, did the jewel come from her body like in the anime? That part wasn't clear. !!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 09:41 CDT
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OH shit, i mean damn, i mean crap, pooh...... Inu figured it out on his own and Kagome's in frikkin trouble, is he gonna kill her, oh please god don't kill her....puppy eyes, so what's happening next?? Update soon!!!
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Title: CCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 21, 2006 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! Sorry Kagz . Well can't wait to read more of this story. The chapters keep getting better and better. OOOOOOOOOO This iz so awsome . I love your stories. ' Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 23:19 CDT
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That was... a very long explanatory paragraph. Like... crazy long. It fit though, it definitely fit. So is it going to be a war for the jewel or what? YOu mentioned something about Kingdom Wars before... so maybe... ne? A piece of advice though, CHANGE SESSHY'S TITLE! King sounds horrib;e, you should stick with Lord. Lord Sesshomaru. Though, I suppose if Kagome;s a princess... yeah. Whatever. Do as you wish. Love it though, even if I'm not sure where it's going. : )
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 23:14 CDT
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There wasn't a jewel before, and now there suddenly is one, she doesn't seem too unhappy about training to be an assassin, and iot's Inuyasha, isn't it? That's your fixings for you! Do you actually go back and fix it though? Or just fix it in your mind and say next time I've gotta do this?
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 23:09 CDT
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Assassin, Kagome... ha. That's one thing I can't picture her doing. Isn't Inuyasha nice to do that for her? Is the Silver Fang going to end up being Sesshomaru or his dad or someone? Because I think you said Inu's dad is still alive right? Perhaps you should have explained a bit more about the tension between lands or something, you know, just so it doesn't seem like Inuyasha's running of to kill someone for not a very good reason. Ne?
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 23:04 CDT
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You know, I could really imagine Rin doing that, as a little girl in the anime too. So cute... Great chapter, and I'm not stopping reviewing unless you tell me! Are you coming this Thursday?
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 22:53 CDT
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Dearie me. Am I being threatened again? Maybe I shouldn't write so many reviews? Would ever other chapter be better? Or maybe I should just disregard everything you say and review even more so MORE people will discover your story! Reviewed stories attract more people you know, very true. *nods sagely* Yep.
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 22:48 CDT
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That was very amusing. I laughed a bit. Why is it that the young main character girls always seem to be hit on by some grizzled old man and then the guy she ends up loving saves her? CLICHE! Ha. You shouldn't update so fast! I go on there one day and there's nothing, then up comes the next and I have to stay on the computer a friggin hour and a half so I can read it all! Gr.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 20:31 CDT
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o0o0o i think she should tell him!! this is an awsome story!! PLEASE update soon!!
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