| "Under the Blood Red Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:43 CDT
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so is she going to tell them that she is the heir? Or is she going to hide that bit of information... thank you for explaining things to me.^_^..........update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 19, 2006 15:59 CDT
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Update. Update-update-update. NOW!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:41 CDT
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awsome story! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:40 CDT
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awsome story! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 22:58 CDT
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Problem: You never once mentioned a jewel in this story so now there's a jewel? And I don't believe you mentioned kagome was a miko which would be the reason she holds the jewel. She wouldn't have it if she wasn't a miko because you can't have someone impure guard the jewel.So there are the faults in this story that I have seen.Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: June 18, 2006 15:33 CDT
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It's a lot better. This chapter was easier to read than the previous ones. My compliments. On a different note, good chapter. But what a horrible cliffhanger. I certainly hope you update soon to releive the anxiety. I'm also interested to see where the story itself will go. Anyways, best of luck writing the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 17, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!! this stiry iz getting so good i cant wait to read tha next ch's please update soon ' Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i can't wait to read more about this story it is getting so good!! please up date!! SOON
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 03:46 CDT
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haha he tricked her.He is the silver fang.lol anyways update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 01:17 CDT
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Good story. I found it yesterday and I'm glad I decided to follow it. Some points your writing could benefit from: maybe do longer chapters and refine the flow a little bit. You have great characters and a good plot, but making it flow is key to having it work. Less abrupt sentences, etc. I really do think it is a wonderful story, but thought I'd throw in my two cents. Also, it is your story, so do what you will with it. Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still liking this story. That was funny on the last chapter that you updated. Well you keep on updating and I'll keep on reading and reveiwing.
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool i can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 21:10 CDT
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GOOD CHAPTER, BUT THEY ARE SUPER SHORT, STOP IT AND MAKE THEM LONGER!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story its kinda funny in a way. Hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.
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