| "Under the Blood Red Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 23:04 CDT
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You know, I could really imagine Rin doing that, as a little girl in the anime too. So cute... Great chapter, and I'm not stopping reviewing unless you tell me! Are you coming this Thursday?
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 22:53 CDT
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Dearie me. Am I being threatened again? Maybe I shouldn't write so many reviews? Would ever other chapter be better? Or maybe I should just disregard everything you say and review even more so MORE people will discover your story! Reviewed stories attract more people you know, very true. *nods sagely* Yep.
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 20, 2006 22:48 CDT
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That was very amusing. I laughed a bit. Why is it that the young main character girls always seem to be hit on by some grizzled old man and then the guy she ends up loving saves her? CLICHE! Ha. You shouldn't update so fast! I go on there one day and there's nothing, then up comes the next and I have to stay on the computer a friggin hour and a half so I can read it all! Gr.
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 20:31 CDT
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o0o0o i think she should tell him!! this is an awsome story!! PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:43 CDT
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so is she going to tell them that she is the heir? Or is she going to hide that bit of information... thank you for explaining things to me.^_^..........update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl On: June 19, 2006 15:59 CDT
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Update. Update-update-update. NOW!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:41 CDT
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awsome story! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:40 CDT
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awsome story! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 22:58 CDT
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Problem: You never once mentioned a jewel in this story so now there's a jewel? And I don't believe you mentioned kagome was a miko which would be the reason she holds the jewel. She wouldn't have it if she wasn't a miko because you can't have someone impure guard the jewel.So there are the faults in this story that I have seen.Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: June 18, 2006 15:33 CDT
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It's a lot better. This chapter was easier to read than the previous ones. My compliments. On a different note, good chapter. But what a horrible cliffhanger. I certainly hope you update soon to releive the anxiety. I'm also interested to see where the story itself will go. Anyways, best of luck writing the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 17, 2006 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!! this stiry iz getting so good i cant wait to read tha next ch's please update soon ' Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i can't wait to read more about this story it is getting so good!! please up date!! SOON
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 03:46 CDT
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haha he tricked her.He is the silver fang.lol anyways update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 01:17 CDT
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Good story. I found it yesterday and I'm glad I decided to follow it. Some points your writing could benefit from: maybe do longer chapters and refine the flow a little bit. You have great characters and a good plot, but making it flow is key to having it work. Less abrupt sentences, etc. I really do think it is a wonderful story, but thought I'd throw in my two cents. Also, it is your story, so do what you will with it. Great chapter, looking forward to the next.
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