| "Captured in Charcoal" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 23:15 CST
Comment/Review:
just read chapter 1 i like it!
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Reviewed By: balck beauty On: August 07, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to know what happens next. I don't want to wait months. Please update soon. I want to know how Heero's and Dou's relationship progresses. Keep up the good job |
Reviewed By: himitsu kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies* i love this fic! keep it up pretty please *begs with cute cibi eyes* i'm dying to see what happens rofl i can't picture heero bowling at ALL...
-bek |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: July 09, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't hurry up and finish this fic I will come to your house,hog tie you to a chair ,and threaten you with my ninja cats to do so;) |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 09, 2003 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more, more... I want to read and find out what happens next. Btw, the explanations you have made do help out alot when reading this fic. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: June 14, 2003 12:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
It has been a very long time since you updated this story, but i still check anyway every month or so... please keep the writing coming! It is a wonderful AU fic, and i like how you write intimacy- i'm looking forward to the lemon/ higher rated scenes muchly! |
Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 13, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I have noticed that some people have that twinkle in their eyes. I just can't place it sometimes though. I kinda makes ya wonder about what they are thinking about at that particualr moment, and hoping it's you. If it's not, then heh, what are ya gonna do about that?
Anywho, I like this story very much. I like your description of Duo very, very much.
I hope to see more and all that good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMaaannnn,....*pout*...that is such a SSSShhhhoooorrrrrrtttttttt chapter,...*pout,pout*....i've quite a long time for you to updated this fic,...PPlllllaaaaeeeesssseeeeeeeeeee continue soon,...NNeeeedddd Mooorrreeeee Chhhaaaappptteerrrrrrssss,.........*puppy-dog-eyes*...till next chapter,...Jaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaannnbbaaaatteeeee-Nee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
usually i complain about chapters being so short, but because of the awesome awesome job you did of writing it and it was just oh so sweet *high from reading such good fluff* i'll spare you this one time. I'm glad you're doing stuff with this fic again! i read it a while ago and was disappointed to see you hadn't updated in a while. i'm happy you haven't abandoned it!!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Terr On: June 10, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Damn, never thought I'd see this one updated again! It was very very good!! I didnt think it was too short... nope, just perfect. Captured all the sweet Duo Heero moments before concluding! Loved it. Now... are you planning on waiting a year for the next chapter? ^.^ Lol, ok, ok, so I know how you feel. I'm a major procrastinator too. :P |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: June 10, 2003 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eh, it got cut short...hehe. AS I was saying...it was entirely too short, but great nonetheless. This is really an amazing story. Don't forget about it again, ne? =) |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: June 10, 2003 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwww, that was entirely too short >_ |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
oh wow, I haven't reviewed this yet?! *embarrased* see, i read it on fanfiction.net i think, and well... i think i started reading it december 2002, and waugh u haven't updated! so *strikes dramatic pose* UPDATE! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shadowfax01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to post the next chapter soon? Pretty please with cherries on top? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!! I love your style. Really well written and well described too or something. ^_^
I really haven't noticed any grammar mistakes though I may be too captured in your story that I didn't see any.
The originality is really a 10. I couldn't come up with such an idea anyways even though I love to draw ^_^U hehehe
Well, I've really enjoyed your fic, I wonder how it's going to be on that date of theirs ^-^
GREAT WORK! KEEP IT UP! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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