| "Blue Skies" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 10:13 CST
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this story rocks plzplzplz uppdate soon
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Reviewed By: Chaos_star951 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 20:05 CDT
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I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is very interesting and I like the harem list so far.
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, good choise with Anko and Kurenai their my favorit.
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Reviewed By: deth_punch9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, but it would help if it was a little longer.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damnit...when will this nosebleed go away? This is very good. Keep updating. Time to go take cold shower...
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Reviewed By: Havenoname [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 00:09 CST
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This story is looking really good! Can Hinata be added to the harem too? She's so sweet and gentle that I would love to see Naruto make a woman out of her too.
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Reviewed By: animemaster168 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It's got a very well written plot to it and the choice of women for the Harem is of high exceptance as well. Good discriptions of situations as well and also the lemons are very nice. Hope the next chapter's up soon. Animemaster168
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
good choise with temari. i like her.
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovin it so far would like to add my fav to the list, hinata but thinking it might b 2 many girls, if there r 2 many u start losing the storyline n just end up with random spontanius fucking, which is good (insert Lecherous grin here) but prefere it had a plot which so far u'v done cant wait 4 next chapter =)
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 08:43 CST
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A borderline incestuous relationship? That was something I didn't expect.....but at the same time it's kind of interesting. As for the Harem, I like the list you have the way it is. If there are too many girls included it becomes hard to follow. Plus you already added my favorite, Temari, so I can't ask for much more. I hope you keep your new year's resolution and write more, because I would love to see some more frequent updates on this. It's getting pretty good.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 15:58 CDT
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i want more please. i like it lots.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad start. Keep writing.
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