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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 01, 2007 12:01 CST
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I wonder why Hunter just automatically believed Kagemusha? Shouldn't he have asked his father first? oh dear! I don't want them to fight to the death. sigh. ANyway - good chapter. You put a good deal of background information as well as action into this chapter. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:51 CST
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Aww, such a short chapter, but full of action. I must say that it is strange that Inuyasha didn't check with his father that he was supposed to kill Angel, especially since his father gave no indications that he was resigned to that yet and that Kagemusha was a scumbag. Oh, well, I suppose we'll see next chapter if he indeed does go through with killing her. I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 14:03 CST
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ooooooooooooooo so suspenseful...i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 18:03 CST
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: Dark Heaven
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Angel Blood
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great action and update! I think the Hunter is InuYasha and I can't wait until the next chapter. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: January 14, 2007 03:04 CST
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That was harsh. Poor Kagome, not only was she dumped but she was almost run over as well. And now it looks like Hunter is going to try to kill her. Man, that girl had a bad night. Oh, and this story is great!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 14:43 CST
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awwwwwwwwww so sad...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: January 08, 2007 11:16 CST
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Hunter has been ordered to kill Kagome?!? Wait, I'm confused. Just who does he work for anyway? I thought Inuyasha was Hunter..... I think I need to find where you described him for the first time and re-read that section. I guess that is what I get for falling behind in my reading. OTOH, the chapters that I have been reading have been great. Thanks for writing for us. Caitriona @ Juno (dot) Com
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 07:13 CST
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Omg...... poor sango....Update soon.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 12:30 CST
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ooooooo its great! but did naraku actually hear or not??? i couldnt figure it out...anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far, I only noticed a small handful of errors, mostly little thing like 'hda' instead of 'had'. You seem to be a talented writer, I think I'm going to check out your other stories. Keep up the good work, and don't hurry and update (take your time, the quality will be better that way)
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 14:25 CST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 09:10 CST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 12:48 CST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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