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Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: September 11, 2008 22:03 CDT
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I loved this story, and am so sad to see you ending it. So much action, adventure, excitement. It's been a lot of fun. Couple questions/comments: 1) why couldn't Inu smell that Kagome was Angel? No Hanyou abilities when disguised? 2) Why was Kagome an idiot in the last chapter? She was told that most of the council had voted for her death, she was being hunted specifically, and she uses her actual name? It did make for a good action scene, but I hate it when I want to beat a main character's head against a wall. 3) Why did Haku dispose of tools he invested so much money in so carelessly? Couldn't he have sent them to kill Angel and then not patched em up? 4) My biggest beef. Sango's family is murdered, she is Kagome's closest friend, and Kagome's next scene is putting on makeup? I don't think healing deep emotional scars fits with the pace of the story. However, the whole things seems incredibly off without some kind of healing. I know you were wanting to go somewhere with the scene, but I think the story as a whole would be better without it. Don't think that just cause I had a couple of beefs with the story, I wasn't eager for more. I loved what I read, so don't hesitate to pick it up again!
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Title: noooo
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh duuuude f*** you for dropping it like that. im like so fucking pissed and saddened right now. *cries angrily*
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Perhaps. Or perhaps it is just a bout of the flu, and you are wasting our time on her," Kagome replied. "He's been waiting fifty years, Naraku. He will not wait much longer. You made a deal with us, Naraku, and you will not back out now." Im PRETTY sure you meant for it to be Kagemusha talking. But you typed Kagome instead. Its a little thing, not too important, but I just thought Id let you know, heh.
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 21:24 CDT
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noooo!!! Please keep updating! if they have to go to Horai then you should have one of them like miroku or sango speakto the Ino no Taisho on what's going on over in Haven. Then make it to where Kagome and Hakudoshi are the only two hosts around or left alive to harnest the Sealed ones's power. After that they fight for the power, one uses it for good the other for evil and they battle it out to get the power. But those are suggestions please update as soon as possible! This story is too good to just give up on now!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 23:53 CDT
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It's too bad that this story is on hiatus. I really enjoyed it. However, if you can't think of anything, sometimes it's worse to try and get something out no matter what the quality is. I certainly hope that taking a break and working on other things might revitalize interest in this story, and in the meantime good luck on your other things and I'm very glad you decided to leave it up so that we can enjoy what you did write.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 17:42 CDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 14:49 CDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 08:25 CDT
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omg this is really getting good. i still wanna know about whats between inu and kags...but i guess thats on hold to save the city...great chappie!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:42 CST
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this story is awesome. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:37 CST
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BRILLIANT... wow, that's all I have to say. Update sooooooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 17:10 CST
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kk when did Inu decide hes NOT going to kill kags???...anyways i love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 04:40 CST
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Oh! this story just keeps getting more and more interesting! I love the twists! Keep on!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 22:53 CST
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great new chapter. keep updating! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome update! im so excited.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 15:13 CST
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ooooooooooooooooo LOVES IT...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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