| "First Crush" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wooooow....... Awesome work! Time for some more! Heehee... |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heehee... I'm enjoying this! Well, I got more time, so I'll be readin' Chapter Four! Poor Suzie... |
Reviewed By: Princess Hikaru On: June 16, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2002 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read the conclusion! I'm glad Suzie's alright. Excellent job! |
Reviewed By: Chiika [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Enjoyment factor 10+++++!!! This is awesome! Write more soon!!!
~`Azul`~ |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go Black War Kazumon! A hero to have saved Suzie and give two -holes their just desserts. This is so captivating! Poor Suzie! I hope she will recover! I hate to think how Lopmon feels now, as she unknowingly let Suzie (partner, Tamer, and friend) bring herself close to death. And I think Chip has to fear more than just Henry and Kazu, but all of Suzie's friends and family.
Please continue soon! I cant wait for the next part! Excellent writting!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! The roller blading scene was nice, even with Suzie's eating dissorder starting to hamper things right in front of Kazu. A sad turn as Suzie refuses any help from Ai and almost hurts Ai more than she wanted to. Also great scene of Impmon and Ai. Gee, sometimes Brothers can be really silly! Now I hope Kazu can help, but I fear he doesn't want to believe that Suzie is doing that to herself.
Excellent story! Now on to Chapter 8!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: unknown On: June 12, 2002 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa.. What's gonna happen? Please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Psycho Moon On: June 10, 2002 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good... please finish soon... I'm now making a Kazu/ Suzie site because of this fict... what is going to happen to Suzie though? I WANNA KNOW!!!!!!! *cries* POOR SUZIE! |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great chapter! So, she's in the hospital now, huh? Will she be okay? She's not going to die, is she? She better not! Anyway, awesome job! Get the next part up soon, alright? I'm craving for more. |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better! What's Kazu going to do? This is really good! Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: June 08, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Man... are you sure you're not a professional mascerating as a fanfic writer? Great chapter. I love you. |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Poor Suzie... what's going to happen to her? I liked how you made Henry to overprotective big brother. Nice job! Can't wait to read more! Keep it up! You're an awesome writer! |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2002 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another enjoyable continuation for your story. The opening with Kazu's confronation with a peeved Henry is very well written. Kazu has been warned! I am happy that Kazu and Suzie's relationship is slowly yet growing stronger as we know how Kazu feels when he admits his feelings of Suzie to others. Unfortunately her bulimia is what's killing her and no one knows about it. The damaging side effects are starting to show and is now getting even worse. I hope there is a happy ending to this... somehow.
Overall I also enjoyed all the character dialogue. I love that part where he says to Suzie not to fly away! (grins) Nicely put! I really love that scene from the show!
I can't wait for the next part! Please continue on! Wonderful work.
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: June 08, 2002 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't think of anything to say that I haven't said about your fics before. Keep up the good work GG. I love you. |
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