| "First Crush" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ya-Ya On: June 18, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny, heartwarming, plesant, nice, and anything else I can think of.(The positive things of course!) All in all, it's a nice story. I enjoyed it. Really! |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: November 20, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely luv ur fic!! poor suzie, hasta break up w/kazu... |
Reviewed By: Steffi On: November 13, 2002 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kewl story! Kepp riting! |
Reviewed By: Rouxy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Abso-freakin-lutely AWESOME! This is one of *the* best stories I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us MediaMiner.org Members! Mako and Suzie make such a cute couple (though I sort of wish Hirokazu and Suzie were together in the end...but Mako is definately my very second choice! ^^) Thank you so much again for sharing your talent with us! ^^ |
Reviewed By: ~Sweet Anime Fan~ On: July 05, 2002 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! For some reason Media Miner cut off the bit where I talked about my love for Hirokazu! *cries* but this is what I wrote before ^_~:
I've always liked Hirokazu but after reading this fic he's become one of my favs!!! *starry eyes look* He is so hot!!! |
Reviewed By: ~Sweet Anime Fan~ On: July 05, 2002 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these kind of fics! This one was an especially good read. Btw, this is my first time reviewing on Media Miner (FFN is down) so I'm a newbie. ^_^ I love these types of fics because they really make me realise that even I take things in my life for granted and this makes me want to change for the better. I gave all the fanfic ratings 10 except spelling and grammar cause there were some typos. -_-;; But for the enjoyment factor it is equivalent to an infinite number (that's a lot!). ^_~ I saw this fanart of Suzie and she was so pretty!!! That's why I got very emotional on the parts where she said she was ugly. >_hot!!! I like saying his japanese name more. It sounds so smooth when you say it! Here's a thought, Hirokazu's character song is called "(Hero)Kazu no Rock n Roll"! That is so like him right? Kazu the "Hero", get it?! His name's actually Hirokazu. ^_____________^ Enough blabbling about Hirokazu... Well I already said I enjoyed the fic, did I say I love the fic then? If not I'll say it anyway. I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! hehe. This must be such a long review... I hope I'm not wasting your time reading this...@_@;; This fanfic was really emotional. I figured you must have gone through the same sort of thing or maybe your friend did to be able to hit that emotional point. I was right! I'm glad you were able to get better and who knows maybe you've just saved someone's life when they read this and decided to stop their eating disorder! Then you're a hero too! ^_______^ And one last time... I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!
P.S. I think Hirokazu and Suzie make a good couple now. So sad that they aren't together... but Mako and Suzie are cute too! ^______^ |
Reviewed By: Princess Hikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic... but... I wished Kazu and Suzie were together in the end. Still great fic. |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!! THAT WAS SO GOOD I CAN'T BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!!! *spazews for a few more minutes...* Actually, I read it yesturday; AOL didn't give me more time... stoopid AOL and its stoopid time limit... But, still! I like! Well done! |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh (too lazy to sign in...) On: July 01, 2002 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy fruits!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think I saw some resemblence from my Dreams, Romances, and Reality Chapter Nine to you Chapter Nine... Well, in the begining, y'know, one of the girls is in a bad sate of health and their crush is worried about them.... You can check it out and see what I mean....
One more thing: Is Chapter Ten it!?!??! Well, time to find out... |
Reviewed By: Raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read! Excellent work! I enjoyed this fic from start to finish and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Again, excellent work and I'll see you around. Bye! |
Reviewed By: Oichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really good story. At first, I didn't know if I'd like it because of the Suzie/Kazu paring, but now you've gotten me addicted to that paring.
I've never personally had an eating disorder, but a friend of a friend used to have one and it was kinda scary hearing about it. This story is really a good one to read.
Please write more soon! I'd love to read more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Sarah-chan On: July 01, 2002 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
its over!! nnooooooo!! ok so i nearly had a fit when you made Kazu and Susie break up but when Mako asked her out it was just to cute for words!! oh please please PLEASE write a sequel!! i wanna find out what happens with Susie and Mako!! and what happens to Hirokazu and PLEASE?! |
Reviewed By: Goth_Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol since FFN is down iv resorted to mediaminer.org ^_^ anyways I love this story!! love it love it love it!! So anyways I was just sittin around constantly checking to see if fanfiction was up and i thought:
wait a sec... this storys on mediaminer to!!
so you better get the next chapter up soon ya hear!! quickly!! |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neato! I'm glad Suzie's getting better and perhaps have a much stronger of believing in being herself. The part with Jeri visiting was a great scene with the hand puppet. Suzie admires Jeri's strength for her troubled times in the past yet never dwelling on them to live. Excellent work! Also a good stick it to Millie!
Please continue soon! Lopmon must be lonley now. Ooo... Another hand puppet gains life! Yeah!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dang it.... can't read the others yet... OMFG... that was awesome, GameGirl!! Can't wait to read more!! |
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