| "Far Away..." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 17:20 CDT
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That was wonderful!! Excellent job!!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Nadiel of the White Moon On: April 17, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright now I say this keeps getting interesting do keep writing... By the way, besides Denzel and Marlene are you adding other characters?
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Title: Far away
Reviewed By: scarleta On: March 14, 2007 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a rare jem I had to say. The lemon is very artistically and sensually done, and very original too, which is the most important factor in making a lemon interesting to read. I didn't feel like I was reading some cut and paste love scene that is copied from one author to the next. And the way you described Cloud was incredible, it actually made me look at him in a new way.You made me realized how graceful and focused Cloud is when he fights. I was also impressed how you made the shrew observation that he's never let anger taken over him in battle. He would indeed make a great lover. And because of these details and the playful dialogues, your story was very tastefully done. If every lemon fic were like this, I think I would be in heaven! My one complaint is you should put more commas in your long sentences so as to make the reading easier. But besides that, the spelling is good. So I'll definitely coming back for the morning soree. By reviewing, I hope I have earned that priviledge.
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Reviewed By: Luna of the Black Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:57 CST
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Wow... I'm left speachless... oh and if you want to know wake Tifa up first...
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 20:31 CDT
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I love it!!! Can't wait to read the morning after!!!
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Reviewed By: anime_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 23:15 CDT
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*whimpers slightly* Wow theres like no second chapter...... But....OMG!!!you soooooooo freakin rock at writing stories!! This is like the 4th time i've read it....its on my favorites too!!! wait for haveing such a great story ....... *glomps yooh!* you friggin rock my sox!!!!! *licks ur cheek* He he he sry licking ur cheek is my best quality lol......
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Title: Need More
Reviewed By: demetria_sena On: September 01, 2006 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make another chapter the first was just amazing. Plus theres so much more that needs to happen! As for who should wake up first....i don't know! Cloud?
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Reviewed By: metous On: August 30, 2006 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely Brilliant! Though I wish you could continue the story. =) well this is so far the best one I've read, and I am putting it in my favs *gives pat on the back* Well it was definitely customed to the emotions those characters really felt in their world..^^ and the lemon was sensuous too.. It wasn't dirty and sick like some other authors portrayed it; so everything was nice, WAFFY and hot. Great job done! I do hope you continue with more and more Cloti fanfics for us to feast on. ^^
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Title: Far Away.....
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO!!! I loved the fact that you had included so much back story angst in your songfic. You have captured the characters so well and the story didn't seem rushed at all. A very descriptive and well thought out beginning to a wonderful songfic. And who could ever forget that tasefully done lemon. You've got my attention and I think it would be funny to read about the kids waking up first. I can just see their eyes shining bright with the biggest grins on their faces. Take care. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Susan Marie On: August 14, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's poignant and touching, and so incredibly hot. As to who should wake up first, hm...I don't know: the kids? lol. It'd be funny if they got caught in bed by the kids.
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Reviewed By: KuruAnkoku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter. Cloud should wake up first in my oppinion. So he can reflect and come to realize what he's been avoiding. I love how the story was put together. Like it wasn't rushed but it got to the point. Kudo's!!! =^-^=
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Title: Far Away ch !
Reviewed By: kyokitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an enjoyable read - story goes well with the original Advent Children - I really do like the way the characters are realistic in their emotions - people are not always touchy-feely & many do communicate through looks, gestures and overall 6th sense type stuff.
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