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 Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2007 22:41 EST
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ack!! you're not supposed to end it there!!! your supposed to have one of them gasp out the name of who they meet...then end it!!! evil! seriously, brillantly executed. i doubt sesshomaru knew that kagome would be able to pick up on his aura. i have a feeling he's in for a bit of a surprise. and i was so proud of jii-chan for his faith in totosai. the old geezer isn't as crazy as pretends to be. makes him all the more schemeing. kouga is getting wiser and wiser. i think it was good for him to not get what he wanted. i made him start looking at the bigger picture and not jsut at instant gratification. are some of the other youkai present sesshomaru and rin's pups or will we get to meet them at a later time?
 Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2007 21:54 EST
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Oh yes this story is coming along nicely. Please update quickly. I can't wait to see who is waiting to see Kagome and Inu-Yasha. (Maybe a finally reunion between the brothers.) I wonder about Shippo's punishment though that Inu-Yasha had in mind.
 Reviewed By: bardocksbabygirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2007 14:24 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This has to be the most orginal and best Inuyasha and Kagome fanfiction I have read. I can not wait to read more. Please update soon
 Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2007 09:49 EST
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Indeed have Kagome beat the other girls with a very very big stick if they come near Inu-Yasha, or even look at him with lustful eyes. Please update very soon. I would like to know what happens next.
 Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2007 03:32 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter! About time Kouga starting thinking with the head that's on his shoulders...lol REALLY looking forward to the party, I have a feeling there are some surprises waiting for them there... and Inu's take on the honeymoon... sex and roomservice, yeah! only thing missing would be something to kill during the lulls...*smirk* instant happy hanyou. (I saw that comment on Tensaiga, and its been done... but prior to the recent manga where inu-mama made her proclaimation about Kohaku *sigh*) Just wanted to say that your detail about the elaborate garb for the wedding was fascinating. I really appreciate your hard work on that, did you have to do a lot of research? I really enjoy the cultural/Traditional glimpses I get with your stories...Thanks for the update!!
 Title: lol, love it!
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2007 21:47 EST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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ahahahaha! i loved the last chapter where Kagome would have to beat the other girls with a stick. funny stuff. i love this story and i absolutely can't wait until the next one! yay! ^_^ ~~loving fan ~dark irish sorceress a.k.a. shigome
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2007 18:47 EST
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Damn, woman, that was one fine chapter, lol. Okay, chapter 19, another good one, and an awesome continuation of this series of quite fortunate events. Anyway, the story is good, adn I look forward to the party itself. Are some people there gonna be recognized by Inuyasha and Kagome? We shall see. Anyway, that's about it, I look forward to the next chapter with great expectation. Late
 Title: whatever
Reviewed By: fawn of thewoods  On: January 14, 2007 19:34 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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yo, its been a while since i reveiwed for one of your stories and i thought to tell you...You're great!! I love the plot and the suspense. i was also thinking about Kohaku and i realized, no one has ever had the tensaiga save him before. can't wait for your next chapter. PS The chicken pox/youkai was a great idea. all of your oneshots have been excellent. ciao
 Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 13, 2007 23:33 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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wow...it wuz really awesome...of coarse...^_^...i cant wsit till u update again...^_^...untill next time...^_^
 Reviewed By: Crc31789  On: January 12, 2007 21:20 EST
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Awesome chapter! It's actually one of my favorites so far. I LOVED the stuff with Kouga. Especially that line about how him having halfies with Kags had never occured to him before. Just the way you wrote it... It was amusing. xD And you know, you gave me an idea. It's probably been done before, but it's still something I could use. When Shippou's in the hut like -stewing- over what's going to happen to him, I can really see him being so scared that he would just run away. Then they would have to go after him... But Naraku could find him first. Dun dun dun. Anyway. I'd like to write something like that. Maybe someday I will. Even if it's been done before, I could probably put an original spin on it... So thanks for the inspiration. And I'm really looking forward to the wedding. Yaaay. It's going to be really good! And it's cool that it's his human night tonight. Especially since hopefully it's out of the way and he won't have to go through another one before the big Naraku battle? *hopeful* Hm. And I'm wondering about the telepathy thing. He's only got one soul right? And their -souls- are binded... Doesn't the telepathy have more to do with that than his youkai side? I don't know. I think I might be mixing in another story with this one. Wait. Am I??? *confused face* Anyway. You said it was from his youkai side, and I think I do remember reading that. But then how does Kags have it? @_@ Maybe I should re-read or something. Then maybe I would get it... It's just that I forget some things since I'm not reading this all at once. And I'm definately reading a lot of other stories in between. All of them Inuyasha too. @_@
 Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi  On: January 12, 2007 10:38 EST
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i just had to pop while i had a minute. i will dodge that stick kagome is wielding! hmmmm, now if one of your artists could draw us human inu in that suit... i love how everyone is continually evolving. issuses are still being worked on and not everyone is in that complete happy/resolved phase. makes them more real. and kouga finally figured out what he was really feeling. took him long enough. at least ayame didn't just run to him with open arms, she wanted to make sure that he was strong and would be a good match after all he put her through. while love may not be a major first point for youkai taking mates, stability is and she's making sure her tribe will have it. i can't wait for the next chapter...totosai, sesshy, rin, and who knows who else (well you do of course). and gramps finding out his old buddy is more than just a senile man!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2007 03:48 EST
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What can I say that I haven't said before? Your writing, as always, is just fantastic! This story has kept me hooked from the very start of the first chapter of the 1st part of the series. The way you have let their relationship grow and evolve has been a beautiful thing to read. This is one of those stories you can't wait to read -- rushing from one chapter to the next -- dying to see how everything turns out. And yet, you never want it to end. I applaud your talent and bow to a true master of storytelling.
 Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 11, 2007 21:23 EST
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AWWW YAY!! Almost married... lol. Well can't wait for the next ch!! Update soon!
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: January 11, 2007 18:15 EST
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Love it!!! Can't wait for them all to see each other!!!
 Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 10, 2007 02:11 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You have to keep this story going. This is getting too good to stop here. I just had a thought, I would wonder what would happen if Inu-Yasha and Kagome's power grew to where they have the ability to call forth wings? Just a thought, would be cool though. Please update quickly, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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