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Title: Chapter Sixteen part two
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay!! and here we have part two of Chapter 16! Darn, I am sooo very much enjoying the story! How you maintain the smooth and fluid flow of one chapter into the next! It's breath-taking! Kudos! Whoot! Awesome!! Bravo!! Again I love the understand and caring that Miroku showed in this chapter! Wonderful!! I feel more inclined towards him again. One story I was following went into overkill with his groping and lecherous behaviour. I loved the touching moment where they took each other hands. Really love that Sango and Miroku are making their relationship even better! Liked that dinner went better after poor Inuyasha's little moment with Souta all over him. Whoops, Kagome almost let it slip out. I think Jii-chan would have been and probably will be shocked to find out about his (very) old friend but he'll come to terms easily after a bit. An Invitation! Squee!! A Reception!? Oh my!! I am really intrigued by this!! Inuyasha in Formal wear!! Inu in a Tux!! Oh yes!! MUST POST the piccie I have in my collection for you!! It's called Suave Inu Brothers... I think you'll like... I will have to do some searching to find the link for it. And Human!Inu to boot! Am starting to drool already! And Kagome will be getting her engagement ring! The Same night!! Oh! am I ever trilling with pleasure over here!! I can't wait to read! And them trying to get Jii-chan to go shopping for a new set of clothes. Yep, Inuyasha in a suit. Nyummy! Love that Sesshoumaru can give people a start by popping up near them. I chuckled at Kouga's surprise. Yay! For Sesshoumaru displeasure at Kouga's lack of respect for Inuyasha. (It's a brothers right to call siblings names...) Love it! Oh I do so love the tender interaction between Miroku and Sango! So sweet! This time they will have the upper hand on Naraku!! I so can't wait to see his face crumple at the powers that will take him down. They'll wipe the smug smile off of him fast. I actually liked Kikyou's way with Kohaku. She allowed him to decide for himself to see his sister. My liking of her in this story has gone up! Yay!! And the way she answered his questions and concerns, I was feeling teary eyed I can see a hint of Kagome's influence peeking through. I did like a lot that Kikyou remained silent about the possibility of Kohaku's upcoming death or is it re-death? I happily commend you on this!! Kudos!! Bravo! Bravo! Bravissimo!! So completely Awe-Inspiring!! Oh they are discussing the special evening... prick ears up... I wonder how Totosai knew of Inuyasha's night? Doh! Remembered... Totosai brought Inuyasha his repaired sword on the New Moon night while he was still human. I love so much Kagome's confidence in her powers! Hmm... I wonder what this means that Kagome's back was hurting her? Was it just the way she was sitting? Or a hint of a future injury? I have to giggle at Inuyasha, he does love to play with Kagome's breasts especially now he has complete access to them. Shoes!! I love it! Inuyasha in shoes! I can't tell you how much that is amusing to picture his grumpy expression when being told about these. "Can't I wear sandals?" too cute!! Awesome and Amazing!! So sweet!! If anyone can get Inuyasha into a tux and shoes it is Kagome and I bet she won't even have to use anger to do it. I wonder will she make him a deal that he will look forward to? I really do cherish how much you have them both being playful in their relationship, in their love! Sighs very Romantically!! That has to be a bother to have pain when trying for romance/intimacy. I really loved the way Inuyasha got naked so fast and waggled his eyebrows playfull at Kagome. Too cute!! "We'll get to the other later..." Great line here! You keep them so very much in character but have them much more mature! Whoot! Whoot!! Inuyasha rubbing Kagome's back!! Love it!! I wonder what scented lotion Kagome is using? !! I love the massage scene!! I think Inuyasha may be wanting more of the massages now that he knows about them. This is Totally Awesom |
Title: Chapter Sixteen
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we are at Chapter 16 of the reviews!! Rubs hands I so can't wait to get started into this chapter!! So far I am thoroughly pleased and super amazed!! The story is flowing so wonderfully and smoothly from one chapter to the next! Superb work! Masterfully painted!! So Chapter 16: I still love it when they hold hands and can show affection for each other openly now. Mama Higurashi is certainly a very understanding mother. Great woman she is! I love they way you have her better than the Anime portrays her. She is not a "ditz" or empty headed like a lot of other writers like to portray her. She lets them know if they need to be intimate with each other they can and to be careful. Again, an Awesome capturing of the character that is not very in the series that often. The goofy grin!!! That is one of my favourite expressions to read written on Inuyasha! So sweet that Inuyasha said that, that he loves her and knows he doesn't say it enough and how hard it is for him to say it. Swoons in Romance... That was wonderful! Inuyasha getting his own clothing for the modern era to wear. And Mama is doing good... she knows he is fussy about the clothes. I love how you write their kisses. And I had to laugh at the image of them getting a face full of water while kissing... Great humourous and realistic touch there. I wondered if something like that could happen. That was a hot position he put her in... from Karma? Love the shower scene! So hot! And Nyummy!! Looks like Kagome wants to tire out her beloved hanyou. You always write so that it not 'sex' but heart filled love making. Kudos! Whoot! Whoot! Awesome! I wonder... Does Inuyasha's hair become very puffy after a shower when toweled off? Ah! Kouga has come back! With news I hope for everyone. And you have kept those two beta wolf demons perfectly in character... always panting trying to catch their breaths. Lol! Alright! Kouga showing some smarts there and leaving the area without being a big pain in the butt! Poor Miroku. Can just see the awkward pose he is in. Struggling to keep Sango back and keeping Shippou's mouth shut. That was a powerful paragragh you wrote there. With Kohaku's appearance. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see! Okay that had me in tears as well! sango and Kohaku sobbing against each other. I can only hope that Kohaku will be freed from his torment, either by resting in peace or by somehow erasing his awful torture under Naraku's grasp. If anyone needs the jewel's wish it would be him. Maybe Tensaiga can be use? or are you following with what SessMom said? I'm still crying! This is a bunch of tissues pasage. LOVE it!! Oh Please keep it up! Maybe even have Kohaku get in the final blow... Oh I love the way you write, how you draw in the reader and effortlessly blend them into the characters, into the scenes, into the emotions... Truly Amazing and exquiste work!! That was so cute with Souta showing his great joy at knowing Inuyasha and Kagome are getting married! Loved that Inuyasha caught him and looked at him puzzled. Yes!! Kagome has matured! She understands the look Inuyasha gave her for what he was trying to say. He was asking her for help!! YES!! Love it!! Laughed when Souta stated he could be more like Inuyasha with the formal traditional clothing and I could see Jii-chan sweat drop at Souta's exclaimination!! Sango isn't take it well that Naraku's latest offspring was walking around in her old home. I did like the sense of loss that now is part of the village. It feels like Byakuya may want freedom from Naraku as well. He doesn't want to do any dirty work but likes to taunt and tease. That was an amazing first step for Sango and Kohaku in the healing process. I am so happy with Miroku being a very honourable person when Sango needs him to be her comfort, her strength at this time. Kudos!! Love the maturity that you are showing in Miroku that he is growing! And it was so touching that Rin was also worried about her. Love Kaede's wisdom! What a woman!
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shame shame on Shippou!! Looks like he's pretty much put himself on a 'time-out' by making himself scarce. I just love the description of the rings!! I love unique jewlery, and those rings just scream to be made!! I wish I were an artist, I can just seen them in my mind. Lovely chapter, I am anxiously awaiting your next update, I just love this story/series. Again I say thank you for sharing your talent with us all!! MKT
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Reviewed By: kzara_003 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic. Keep updating it.
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Title: tears
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes away last traces of anime tears* i luv ur story...its so beautiful...cant wait for the next chapter...update soon!! ^_^..-.+
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Reviewed By: Crc31789 On: December 29, 2006 21:40 EST
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YAAAAY. New chapter!!! I had forgotten about what Kikyou did to him. There really is a downside to reading as many different fanfictions as I do. It's hard to keep them straight. Actually, if I read the entire thing all at ONCE it's easier. But I start getting a little confused by the ones that are still being updated. ^^" MEAN Kikyou! Those 'bands' are awesome. But I admit I had some trouble understanding your description of them. I don't know that you could have described it better, so I think the problem lies with me. I just can't quite picture the rings. But I'll take your word for it. Rings that look like Goshinboku. Very interesting. And I hope this will be the last time Kagome worries about his feelings for Kikyou, that stupid girl. :/
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Title: Great chapter! I eagerly await the next one!
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, Shippo just keeps getting himself into more and more trouble. He really pushed his luck this time when he tried to keep Inuyasha and Kagome's rings away from them, especially trying to blackmail Inuyasha. I can't wait to see the final chapter where Naraku finally gets what he deserves.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. When the time comes, I think Shippo's punishment will be well deserved!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
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Title: I love your writing!
Reviewed By: Yukiinu On: December 17, 2006 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began reading this story only about 3 weeks ago, and I have finished all of the chapters that you have posted so far, and for me, that is unusual, normally I woundnt have the time. For this fanfic though, I made time! It was a very absorbing story and I am dying to see what happens in the end! Thank you for takeing the time to write this wonderful story! I look forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we are, on the next part of the reviews!! That makes it Part Two!! Yay!!! So cool!! I am sooo loving the story!! LOVE it!! Whoot!! Bravo!! The chapters are a pleasure and joy to read! Sesshoumaru is right they need to keep training with the knowledge that the final battle with Naraku is drawing even nearer than before! Glad he will give the two mates time together before they start up again. Yay! Giving both of them a nice and deserved break. Did Sesshoumaru just compliment Kagome or praise her? Shocked!!! Ah, I see the connection now from the previous chapter! That little mystery is nicely cleared up. Yay!! I am so excited while reading this chapter!! Like a long and well earned rest!! Poor Sango, can't get a break. Snickers... She should know by now that given the opening he will grope. Loved the parting comments! That was a lucky break that Byakuya only saw the "Attack" and nothing else! Oh!! I am on the edge of my seat!! It's getting more and more exciting!! Kouga told the village the assassin was killed but not by whom... taking credit... sighs... ah well... at least we know the difference! Oh Yes!! I love this... they are debating about Kagome's barrier and Inuyasha's ability to go through it. Hooray! Sesshoumaru was able to explain it perfectly!! I really like how their love makes them such a powerful team! And with each tender moment it only serves to strengthen the bonds and increase the power. How very devious of him! I wonder if Sesshoumaru will concur that they will even surpass him in power (even if it is in his mind only). Loved the way Sesshoumaru asked Sango to teach Rin how to read and write! So very much in character! I am sooo awestruck by your ability to peg this character so perfectly!! Bravo! Kudos!! Oh dear they left Shippou to watch over the meal... giggles. Wow! I mean WOW!! The description of the kiss is really hot!! Fans self... Smart Hanyou for not slicing Kagome's skirt off. Very hot! Very intense! I do hope there are no splinters threatening from the wooden walls. Cringes at thought of splinters in Kagome's butt. Ouch... Oh my, LOVED Kagome talking dirty talk to Inuyasha. Also very hot! So feral and passionate!! Awesomely Amazing!! *Gets big starry Anime eyes* I sooo squirm with admiration at the way you write the love scenes with each intenseness it can be done in!! and the way Kagome said I guess you really did miss me... too cute and funny!! Awesome!! I love it when Sesshoumaru and Kaede talk! Yes! Sesshoumaru is letting another know of his suspicions! Chuckles... Sesshoumaru really needs to understand irony when it is presented to him. Kaede had to explain she was chuckling at the expense of Naraku. ...URK!! Bad Nikkie!! Bad imaginary!! I think my mind went down the wrong road about Inuyasha's fundoushi. Chuckles... Out of curiosity... how many would Inuyasha have? And how does he get one if needed? Lol!! Thank you for answering my concerns about Kagome's butt and splinters... giggles more! Yay!! Kagome didn't mind him snicking her undies!! I still wonder what will become of this little revelation. Loved how tender they are afterwards. Darn it they are my favourite couple!! Nice to add some humour into the moment!! Great work!! Good to hear news about Jaken. Simply beyond Amazing!! How superbly this is written!! I can see Jaken wanting to be away from Shippou as much as he can. Nice, Shippou is still being spoilt. Like that Sango pointed out it to him it isn't just his attitude towards learning that is cause his problems but also his physiology. But he did act like a spoilt brat by burning the pages... I wonder what Kagome will say to that. Oh my word!! Can feel the tension! Even Sesshoumaru can sense it as can Kaede! Miroku has reappeared with Kikyou! I can see a beating for Miroku in the future. Kikyou has brought Kohaku forth!! Oh my!! I'm on the edge of my seat!! Thank you!! This is one heck of a chapter!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Whoot! Whoot!! And now for chapter 16!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And now we will commence the next grouping of reviews for you! This is totally Awesome, Literary Goddess!! I have some chapters to catch up on!! Yah!! Scampers off to do this! Okay, first we'll start with Chapter 15. Does the Dance of Joy... Sesshoumaru is rather interested in why Kikyou is back. And that Inuyasha isn't around but Kagome is. Can't say he isn't a curious puppy! I can't wait to see this little meeting. I wonder if Shippou is going to be disappointed that Rin won't be swayed and fall over in love with him like all the other village girls he has run across. Then again he wouldn't mention anything while Sesshoumaru is around. I wonder if Rin will say the same thing to Shippou... that he is immature. Nah... he has been getting better lately. That Rin is sure smart! I am soo thrilled you have kept her so true to the Manga! To Rumiko's creation! Awesome!! Kudos!! I love it!! I love that Kagome and Inuyasha can wrap each other up with their auras and love even though so far apart. I wonder if it will mean that Kagome can go through the well now without Inuyasha... will wait to see. Ah nuts. They are both getting interference... though Myouga and Totousai did leave Inuyasha alone. Looks like they'll have to state it clearly again that they'll want to be left alone to be with each other... intimate or not at times... I laughed at Kagome perspective about phone sex. That was great!! I really enjoyed that touch!! I enjoyed the conversation between Totousai and Myouga when they went back to the Sword smith's dwelling. And I was tickled by "Just what that was we witnessed out there," that was funny considering what Inuyasha was doing earlier. Giggles happily! Bravo! Enjoying this chapter so very much!! Oh my GAWD!!! Inuyasha snicked a pair of Kagome's panties!! That little Hentai Inu!! Never knew he had that in him!! I am quite pleased and thrilled by this devious revelation!! I wonder what other delicious little bonuses will come forth??? Purrs happily!! Bravo!! And many Kudos!! Whoot! The Hentai Inu!! Whoot!! I wonder if Kagome will find out he did this... and I wonder if Kagome will let him continue this or supply him with little "presents" if they can't be together or similar... rubs hands together devilishly!! Sweet, Kaede is still young enough to be a little embarrassed or uncomfortable. I really do enjoy and thrill to the way you make Kaede such a wonderful and important part of your stories! That she is a full character not a cameo type of character appearance of fleshing. Snickering over Kikyou needing two days to get over the blow to her ego. Love it!! Thank you so much Literary Goddess!! I really love and admire how realistically you have Kagome progressing with her training! So very realistic!! Awesome!! Masterfully done!! Looks like Kikyou also is seemingly wanting to (semi) get back at Kagome for the undignified ass landing. But I do agree she will make Kagome push her herself to prove herself to her ex-rival for Inuyasha. Whoot!! Bravo!! Bravo!! I have chills running down my skin after reading that Naraku's spy was watching them! Getting better and better as I read!! Wonderfully sequenced and presented!! Not going too fast nor going too slow!! Brilliant!! Sheer Brilliance!! I think I have it... It has been three days since Inuyasha and Kagome had the Mystically Telepathic Phone Sex. That is... Wow!! Inuyasha went right through the barrier as if it wasn't even there and the barrier becoming solid!! Wow!! Totally Awesome!! Yes!! Inuyasha kissed her passionately in front of the others!! Whoot!! Whoo-hoo!! I am such a need of Inuyasha/Kagome squish!! And this does more than fill that need!! Swoons!! Soooo cute!! (I forgot to mention it but thank you for having Kaede talk like everyone else. I wonder why she spoke the weird way...) Another neat trick by Kagome a solid privacy barrier. That will be really useful when they want to be alone and people seem to interrupt them. Sesshoumaru's loving greeting, sighs...
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Title: *Ditto* to Fyrloche
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 16:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now who'd a thunk that Yasha would take care of the shoe 'issue' on his own? Fun chappie! "horny dog" indeed...lmao at that one. Sango's acceptance of Miroku's comfort was surprising, among others, but nice. I enjoyed that. And Kaede's speculation about Sesshoumaru and Rin's relationship was interesting. Where it may go, only time will tell, but she's an observant ol' crone, so it makes sense that she might consider these kinds of things in passing. And what a great day for the Hanyou and Miko, eh? I should have days like that... *sigh* and as always Momma Higurashi just takes it all in stride... what a gal!! It's awesome she doesn't have a bunch of hangups, eh? Looking forward to more! Really enjoying this fic!
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Title: Sex and shopping
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 07:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds like a dream come true for you doesn't it? A day starting out with great sex, followed by shopping to your hearts content and then ending it with more great sex. Even a guy can't complain about that one! At least I wouldn't!! laughs And I know that if you had Inuyasha with you, you would probably just skip the shopping. snorts Later.
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Title: crc31789
Reviewed By: namewithheld [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I decided to stop being lazy and give you the review you deserve to keep your spirits up. Even if you don't update just for the reviews--the point is that you deserve to get them and I haven't reviewed in a long time. I like this story a lot and I'm really enjoying it. I love the connection between Kagome and Inuyasha in this story, and the writing style, the powers that have resulted from their union, and all the plot developments. It's really good. As for this chapter specifically, I liked it a lot. The scenes between Kagome and Inuyasha were just... nice. So was their day together at the mall. It was very nice ('nice' is my word, I use it whenever something is pleasant and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ^^"). Oh. And the part about the shoes GREATLY amused me. Mostly because the guy that has the shoes specially imported has GOT to be Sesshy, right? It's gotta be. They were just talking about him and it's just got to be. But it's funny. And speaking of funny... poor Inuyasha when he knocked over the panty rack. xD But he handled it with a lot more grace than he would've a few years ago, so *thumbs up for IY!* Keep up the good work! This is one of my favorite stories that's still running.
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 20:57 EST
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Eowyn Organa stop hatin. Unlike u I LOVE THE WHOLE THING!! Even the sex scences. There is nothing wrong wit it and if u don't like it fuq off. Well LOVE UR FIC and I hope u UPDATE SOON!
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