| "Yin And Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: veed On: August 03, 2007 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story. update soon.
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You can't just leave us hanging there!!! I hope you have a great summer and get all inspired to keep this great story going. I'm totally won by the characters. Nitpicks? You need to beta your stories. Lot's of missing words, including Trent's name in one chapter. Minor though, compared to enjoyment factor.
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I'm really liking this, and I don't always like high school AU. I love the dynamics you've set up among the characters, and am really rooting for Heero to save Duo. :-) And "poutien" and "Chapters"? Let me guess; you're Canadian?
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 02:14 CDT
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still here ^^. cute chapter. i love the trowaxheero cuddling scene. i'm sorry to hear about your semester; hope the next goes better for you!
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 01:42 CDT
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That was great. Heero is making progress and it looks like Duo may be making some too - a bit. I'm glad Odin is the understanding supportive parent and not that 'other kind'. I can't wait for the next chappie! Oh yea, what song is that Duo is singing/listening to on the computer? ~Duchess~
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i'm so glad this fic isn't dead. it's great! x) i love the new chapter. hehe heero know's he's gay now! w00t.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! It's a great story. I can't wait to see what's next. I like how you are building the relationship between Heero and Duo and not just throw them together. It's obvious Duo needs to learn to love himself before he can love anyone else and I get the feeling that Heero isn't going to be more then friends with him unless he's in love with Duo. Great story, can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 00:56 CDT
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Wow. My Duo's an asshole. LOL Didn't see that one coming... Great 1st chappie! ~Duchess~
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please. :) can't wait for them to hook up.
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Reviewed By: arien On: January 13, 2007 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic definently impressed me, i loved if very much..please continue...? if you are able please email me at ariencalen@gmail.com if there are any updates..or ideas. thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have GOT to continue this fic!!! i love it sooooooo much!!!
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Reviewed By: Golo On: October 11, 2006 20:59 CDT
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Ooh, this is a very nicely written, intriguing fic! I found that once I started reading, I really couldn't stop. I have to say, I'm really loving the subtle behavioral aspects that you've interspersed with the obvious. I particularly love the way you've written Duo, keeping him strong like he really is, and bringing in some vulnerability in a more realistic way, followed by very, very real reactions that skew from the common. Excellent! Eager for more!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_Angel On: October 11, 2006 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh heero just needs to kiss him... but he needs to do so in a way that duo doesnt think he's just like every other asshole... he needs to tell him that he's beautiful!!!
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Title: Rollercoaster!!! Weee!!
Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a ride. I must say that was very fun. The ups and the downs. The twists and turns. Very good. I think I might ride this again. It was fun and interesting and I was in tears because I was enjoying myself a bit too much. I was also scowling when things went the way I didn't expect them. Like the seond bump before the end. Although, I must say that the end left me wanting more, but I was still satisfied. I'll get on again, when the next loop of the ride gets installed.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay more more
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