| "Yin And Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story keep it up.~.^
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Title: please sir may i have some more??lol
Reviewed By: ShinigamiAngel On: August 11, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! more please???
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Title: Write more
Reviewed By: ShinigamiAngel On: August 11, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more... come on they just need to kiss lol you know they both want it, secretly deep down inside. and heero will tell duo he is worth more than he thinks. and never to let anyone use him again!!! lol
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Reviewed By: juyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhu! fast update! I like it!
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Reviewed By: Shardae [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how real and understandable the characters are, as well as how realistic their problems are. I love how you explain the party scenes, most of the time writers end up with a fairly generic club/party chapter, but yours are unique. Overall, I'm impressed with this fic and I can't WAIT for more. I love it.
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. The story and characters are totally believeable and it flows very well. Really good and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: August 03, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You *points* are a genius. This is brilliant, believable and IC, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shevaleon (not logged in) On: July 25, 2006 18:21 CDT
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Oooooooh!! I like where you're taking it. Very good. I hope it would be more clear in the next chapter why Duo ignores Hee-chan. Still, Hee-bear AND WEED?! The combination even possible??? Now that you did it, it is. ^-^ Hope to read more soon, Huggles
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Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exqusite! I enjoyed reading your story a great deal! Its just so *real*, I can feel the characters, imagine the scenes, you simply transport the reader into your world! The chapters are wonderfully long and your writing makes them even better, even when at the end I wish there was more,and more, and more, of them... :D Please update fast and get another fabulous chapter to your eager readers!
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Reviewed By: juyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, but i guess the party kind of made me uncomfortble I guess I'm really boring hehehe I just hope Duo sop being stupid and that Heero dont make using drugs an abit, cause I was desapointed that he did. Well, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 23:44 CDT
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Most amusing. Duo, the one who has everything (when he only has nothing in the anime, love that twist) and Heero, with Odin still around, is the great (though odd) figure he is in Operation Zero (or whatever the book is that has all the background stories). Anyway, love the story, love the art, and I think the stoner scene was great!!! Not to mention Heeor's reaction to the sex floor ("sex, so much sex" classic Yuy brainfart!) Keep up the good work, its quite amusing.
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Title: My muse
Reviewed By: Kalico (laziness is my worst virtue) On: July 24, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I waited and waited and here is the update. this is so awesome. i hope Duo learns to love himself and Heero comes to terms with his sexuaDuo stops the crap he does before he permanently damages himself. he's a whore for lack of a better word and it hurts me to say it because i love the guy. Help him plz. In fact you have inspired me to actually put up a story about a whorish Duo that i had recently started. you never know i might actually finish this fic. i hope you update soon. You are my muse. lol. Be good to me and let's see what happens.
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Reviewed By: juyouko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I just hope Duo has a motive to act like the way he does! I hope you finish it!
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Title: Ying and Yang
Reviewed By: Lynhares67 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, you have me hooked :) Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:37 CDT
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update!!!
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