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 Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: dancin4duo [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 03, 2006 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you know, I really don't know why more ppl haven't reviewed this story, I think it's really good! I'm a new author to MMO (yay!) and this was one of the first ordinary life/school stories I read that I felt could actually happen: the way you describe the characters is so real, and I'm really impressed! Please keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing an update as soon as you get a chance! ~dancin4duo (Arya)
 Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 03, 2006 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh highschool, lol glad I'm ou0tta there. But the story's interesting enough that it's cool to relive the second-by-second hormonal changes. Lol keep up the great work and I can't wait until you update. Just gotta know if either Duo, Heero, Quatre, or Trowa will come to their senses. Of course this is highschool boys were talking about lol.
 Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2006 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
*hugs and cudles* dont let school get ya too down. Just rember to take atleats 10 minuits a day to enjoy a chcolat coverd duo *grins* or heroo *drools* or my fav, Quatre! Hell, all the g-w boys are delicious coverd in chcolat...hehehehe
 Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2006 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wonderful story keep it up.~.^
 Title: please sir may i have some more??lol
Reviewed By: ShinigamiAngel  On: August 11, 2006 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay!!! more please???
 Title: Write more
Reviewed By: ShinigamiAngel  On: August 11, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Write more... come on they just need to kiss lol you know they both want it, secretly deep down inside. and heero will tell duo he is worth more than he thinks. and never to let anyone use him again!!! lol
 Reviewed By: juyouko [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2006 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhu! fast update! I like it!
 Reviewed By: Shardae [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2006 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like how real and understandable the characters are, as well as how realistic their problems are. I love how you explain the party scenes, most of the time writers end up with a fairly generic club/party chapter, but yours are unique. Overall, I'm impressed with this fic and I can't WAIT for more. I love it.
 Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it. The story and characters are totally believeable and it flows very well. Really good and I can't wait to read more.
 Reviewed By: Codan  On: August 03, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You *points* are a genius. This is brilliant, believable and IC, please update soon!
 Reviewed By: shevaleon (not logged in)  On: July 25, 2006 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooooooh!! I like where you're taking it. Very good. I hope it would be more clear in the next chapter why Duo ignores Hee-chan. Still, Hee-bear AND WEED?! The combination even possible??? Now that you did it, it is. ^-^ Hope to read more soon, Huggles
 Reviewed By: Lap [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2006 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Exqusite! I enjoyed reading your story a great deal! Its just so *real*, I can feel the characters, imagine the scenes, you simply transport the reader into your world! The chapters are wonderfully long and your writing makes them even better, even when at the end I wish there was more,and more, and more, of them... :D Please update fast and get another fabulous chapter to your eager readers!
 Reviewed By: juyouko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, but i guess the party kind of made me uncomfortble I guess I'm really boring hehehe I just hope Duo sop being stupid and that Heero dont make using drugs an abit, cause I was desapointed that he did. Well, keep writing!
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2006 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Most amusing. Duo, the one who has everything (when he only has nothing in the anime, love that twist) and Heero, with Odin still around, is the great (though odd) figure he is in Operation Zero (or whatever the book is that has all the background stories). Anyway, love the story, love the art, and I think the stoner scene was great!!! Not to mention Heeor's reaction to the sex floor ("sex, so much sex" classic Yuy brainfart!) Keep up the good work, its quite amusing.
 Title: My muse
Reviewed By: Kalico (laziness is my worst virtue)  On: July 24, 2006 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I waited and waited and here is the update. this is so awesome. i hope Duo learns to love himself and Heero comes to terms with his sexuaDuo stops the crap he does before he permanently damages himself. he's a whore for lack of a better word and it hurts me to say it because i love the guy. Help him plz. In fact you have inspired me to actually put up a story about a whorish Duo that i had recently started. you never know i might actually finish this fic. i hope you update soon. You are my muse. lol. Be good to me and let's see what happens.
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