| "The Demon's Blackmailed Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: hollyhill On: July 31, 2006 00:35 EDT
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I think you've made Inuyasha too hateful in this story. I actually hope Kagome can get away from him in the end because he is not a likable person and if she does end up with him, she'll just look stupid or or he will look even more cruel and hurtful than he already does. I don't understand why she let him in her apartment at all even if he did have cooks with him. It was her apartment and she had the right to refuse. You've made her look spineless, weak, and appear to have no self-respect. 'Sorry, but I think you've made Inuyasha's character too unsympathetic for anyone to like him. I hope Kagome can get away from him, otherwise this story will only show that a bully who takes advantage of other people's sorrow and misfortune can get everything they want if they are cruel enough and have enough money. Poor Kagome...
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: darksaint On: July 30, 2006 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I love it god the ending was so freaking funny poor kagome though and Inuyasha god he's such a horn dog your fan darksaint
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Reviewed By: inu_inu_luvluvunregistered On: July 30, 2006 06:17 EDT
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oh woooow!! really good, it's getting better all the time, can't wait till you update (hiding a BIIIG butcher knife) SOON!! i love your long chappies and really... i'm all excited of this! keep it goin'
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Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG thanks For Posting this Its great !!! I love It and I ADORE the Rin/Sess Pairing so Lookin Forward to Reading More
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Reviewed By: kicheria On: July 30, 2006 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it so you must write more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!!!! I love this story so much!!! Please update soon!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in) On: July 29, 2006 23:21 EDT
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Hmm, interesting story...you certainly have built up quiet a situation with a high amount of tension! I can't wait to see where you go with it, and how the 'happy' couple works out. Figures Kagome would be stubborn about listening to him (she certainly did it enough in the series where Kikyo is concerned, lol) and he would be hard headed and go about getting her the entirely wrong way. It's amazing those two haven't done each other in yet! But I suppose it might happen yet, lol...but hopefully not! I guess we'll get to watch some good old-fashioned fireworks until then! I hope you post the next chapter soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: daisie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 22:45 EDT
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your story is really good. i can't wait to read what is going to happen next. But is miroku really seeing another woman behind sango's back? if yes, i hope she is going to make him suffer. or more like you are going to make him suffer since you are the writer. lol
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 23, 2006 15:27 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE,PLEASE OMG PLEASE JUST UPDATE, I BEG OF YOU!ok Im done now sorry buh bi(but I really like it) SO PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: werewolfblood On: July 17, 2006 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was sad but still was realy great so I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to see a new chapter soon. the antisapation is killing me.
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: earthangel1121 On: July 15, 2006 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I love the plot twists and turns and your new chapter is wonderful, loved it. please update as soon as posible
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Title: i love your story!!!
Reviewed By: care102 On: July 15, 2006 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly am in love w/ ur story and writing style. The plot and characterization are amazing and i cant wait to read more!Can't wait for the next chap. please update soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: July 14, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! this story is magnificent i love the plot and how the characters are well actually just like the real ones!! i can't wait for the next chapter! till then!
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: July 14, 2006 15:47 EDT
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too lazy to log in. this story is very touching and emotional. i'm glad that you are writing it.
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