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"Shards of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
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 Reviewed By: Earie  On: March 01, 2016 09:03 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the more extensive character studies of KK and I enjoy reading through Shards of Me every once in awhile. I know it has been years since you last updated this fic, as well as your profile, but if there's a way that you can return to this and close it off.. That would be wonderful. I hope you are doing well in your life as well, I also appreciated your author notes. Your writing shows that you read a lot of books that allow you to hone your own writing style and develop the emotional complexities of the characters.
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2009 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: suns  On: June 10, 2009 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just happened to stumble across this story - glad I did. Really well developed story and characters. Looking forward to the next update.
 Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2009 20:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
Haha! The author returns! and has yet another wonderful couple of chapters for us.:D And yeah, I understand about the whole college taking away all of your time. I still have many more years to go :S But yes, very good chapters. Its really cool to go back and see how everything fits together. Great job.
 Title: ????
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2009 17:52 PST
Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story are you ever going to finish it?
 Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2007 14:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better with every chapter.
 Reviewed By: sulou [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 09, 2007 11:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
And he left? Just like that? Well, it did surprise me a bit that Kaoru had to go throw-up after hearing the details of his military tour. Hopefully they will find a way to work it out. I'm so glad you updated. Made my day, really.
 Title: :D
Reviewed By: *Kelsey*  On: July 11, 2007 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful... as usual.
 Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 04, 2007 09:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
again, simply amazing. you have an excellent story going on here that never ceases to entrance me. Please keep up the good work, and take as long as you need to get this story finished. I will still be reading!
 Title: Of course I'm still reading!
Reviewed By: sulou [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2007 19:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am in love with this fic, and the update was definitely worth the wait. Inspiration comes at odd times usually, and that's all you can count on. I'll be looking forward to that next update. Ooh, Tomoe was such a bitch. It really fit in this situation.
 Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2007 18:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Simply amazing. captivating and beautifully said. I absolutely love what you have done with the characters and the story line. I've even printed it out so i could read it again and again. I know you want to take your time with this one, and i really think that that says how dedicated to writing well you are. And the little interludes move the story line along, not slow it down and bore you to death like many others do. i love it, and cannot wait to see more from you. ~Rhapsody Rasche
 Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 12, 2007 23:08 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is amazing. And good job with the political analysis of current events, I'm glad that I'm not the only one with a sane mind :D The character developement is amazing. I honestly feel if you ever decided to change their names that you could publish this story professionally, I mean it is far enough off of the anime and the plot and developement is better than some published books I've read. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: _Kiley_  On: January 10, 2007 12:13 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There's only 13 reviews for this story? Insanity! I love it, absolutely adore it. The voices of both Kenshin and Kaoru are so perfect and the descriptions are brilliantly done. I've just stumbled across this story, and crave more. Please continue when time allows you to, this is an absolutely fantastic story. =)
 Reviewed By: Rhapsody Rasche [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 06, 2006 17:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow. Again, beautiful. i am speechless. I usually do not like Alternate reality fics, but you have change my mind. simply brilliant. please keep writing.
 Title: i8Cait
Reviewed By: Mah Review  On: October 18, 2006 04:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! Two updates! How lucky are your readers! I was just getting ready to write you off as dead, and then you updated. I love the KK angst- it's actually making me a bit tearful! But I do hope you let them heal one another. I can't wait until the next chapter. Ciao!
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