| "All I Need" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well......this was okay........
i mean u used way too many big werds and....
cmon.......ash is way too young......plus the fact dat ash duzent kno those big werds |
Reviewed By: Greenlund On: January 03, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best of these time of fics I've ever read. I can't believe it. This actually was pleasurable to read. I don't think you could make it any better!
I actually enjoy the rythm of the "big words".
Pikachu did kind of ruin the mood though. |
Reviewed By: SheShe On: December 12, 2002 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice try, but way too sappy for a good lemon. Throw a few more words in there, lass. I like the writing style though! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: HealerAriel On: December 04, 2002 16:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh, hon? Ash and Misty are, like, ten years old... That's kinda wrong... |
Reviewed By: Heero's heart On: November 24, 2002 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,I really liked it. The love between a certain boy and girl was...how should I say
it?...Cool!! Can't wait for your other chapters,write more soon! Oh before I say bye I would like to say something...I loved how you describe every single actions between those two charaters...please write more...BYE!!! |
Reviewed By: Phillypina215 On: November 10, 2002 21:32 CST
Comment/Review:
testing something out |
Reviewed By: Lola4eva On: November 08, 2002 04:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It plain sucked. |
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa On: November 05, 2002 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Again, there's an overabundance of flowery language and description. It's nice so far. Add more and it will be better.~CT |
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa On: November 05, 2002 11:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Overall it's a nice story but I do agree with the others that the language can be toned down a bit. I seriously don't see Ash (regardless how old he is) describing Misty like that. But it's nice so far.~CT |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! ^^ Your style of writting is wonderful. I enjoyed reading it.
~Nakuru Yuy |
Reviewed By: Godzilla On: October 19, 2002 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to many big words, i spent a lot of my time reading it looking through my dictionary untill i said ahh fuck it. i agree with whoever said that Ash doesn't know that many words |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
big words but need alittle......"umph" |
Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the fic. Very detailed and Ive never heard of a Pokemon story like this before. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the fic. Very detailed and Ive never heard of a Pokemon story like this before. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the fic. Very detailed and Ive never heard of a Pokemon story like this before. Keep writing. |
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