| "All I Need" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the fic. Very detailed and Ive never heard of a Pokemon story like this before. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: The Real Unknown [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
sounds like a romance novel sounds pretty good |
Reviewed By: Reddevil On: September 21, 2002 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude wtf is this? to many BIF CONFUZZLING WORDS! I cant tell what half the stuff means, is ash doing misty, is misty doing ash, BIG WORDS, thats what this is and i cannot uderstand it, lighten up in chapter 2 or include subtitles from now on |
Reviewed By: Logan kale [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
truley a superior fic. i love your indepth descriptions, they show the calibur of the writer quite well. my only advice would be to add dialogue. you are able to get more of a feel for the character that way. |
Reviewed By: Usagi On: December 04, 2002 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great usage of words....just plz dont stick pikachu in when that "mood" is around it kinda kills it but over all keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: yuri-pokemon-fan On: May 27, 2002 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEEDS YURI |
Reviewed By: Teko Windstar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this Was Great. Oops I mean Perfect! You are a Great writer and The Pokemon Twist is Very funny since I dislike Pokemon. Keep Writing?
^-^ |
Reviewed By: Infeno On: May 03, 2002 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had a lack of a story to back it up |
Reviewed By: SpArKLeStAr182 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2002 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is good...but you are trying too hard to use big words. In some place, the words you use make...well...absolutely no sense. What's worse is that, mixed in with the wrongly used words, you have many minor grammatical errors (using there instead of their, to instead of too...) You should concentrate less on trying to impress everyone with a big vocabulary and more on making your story readable. |
Reviewed By: The DJ Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2002 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I whish to change my rating of this fic, sry, but after a long time to think about it, these catogories were underrated in my first review.
The DJ Jester |
Reviewed By: SakuraStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2002 05:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I agree wif ~*Naomichan*~, U really do have a way wif wordz. the only chink in this fic *whimpers from the glares* is that I personally think that Ash's vocab is waaaaaaay below this*proceeds 2 flee from all the Ash fans*
*pops back*oh yea, i think the simile wif the pikachu electicity or sumthin' like that is ermm... ...(gomen, but I have 2 say this. Pls dun kill mi!)... ...dumb. *runs like hell*
~Jaa! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: ~*Naomichan*~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Thats really great!! You have a way with words, I love that! |
Reviewed By: The DJ Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!!!
The DJ Jester |
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