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Reviewed By: Nathan036 On: August 10, 2009 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, by far, the best Ash and Misty lemon I have ever read. Then again, this is the only good Ash and Misty lemon I have ever read.
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Title: mhal ko gneve!
Reviewed By: dragonee On: August 12, 2004 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hndi ko alam kng bkit ako ng sslos ky gneve,kc mahal na mhal ko c gneve.
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Title: mhal ko gneve!
Reviewed By: dragonee On: August 12, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Johnny_Bluefire03 On: April 01, 2004 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ONLY bad thing was I didn't know who Ash was with for 3/4 of the story.
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Reviewed By: jezabel1971 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have a problem with big words. I have a very large vocabulary, to the degree that my friends sometimes ask me to define big words rather than looking them up, but, in this case, I think they are a distraction more than an enhancement. There are several errors, worth wild instead of worthwhile, for example, and several times where the words are used incorrectly. Many of the words have connotations that are being ignored and the use of these words detracts from the enjoyment of the fic. I beta for a writer that likes to use big words, and we often end up scrolling through an online thesaurus in order to find a word that not only has the literal meaning she wants, but appropriate implied meanings as well. I'm not going to go over the fic word by word in a review, but I'd be happy to beta it for you through private e-mail, if you like. If you're interested, my e-mail address is jezabel1971_99@yahoo.com. If not, that's fine, but you might want to see if you can find someone who will help you make sure that the words you use and their connotations, both, fit in with the scene you're writing. Not too bad, though, for an experimental fic. I definately think you should keep writing, if for no other reason than your writing can only improve with practice.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Me On: February 16, 2004 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a very beautifully written fanfic - as TrueCharizard said, you should write some books ;) But seriously, nicely done. But, erm, maybe, if you read this... update? ^_^'
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Title: Beautiful...
Reviewed By: TrueCharizard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think some might use the lemon for that fic, as if it was a bad thing. If that's a lemon, then all lemons are sweet. If I could one day match your brilliance, then I would start writing proper books. You friend, will go far in life, very far indeed. Become a book writer for goodness sake, share with the world your gift.
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Title: *jaw drop*
Reviewed By: Blackshadowhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great.I read award winning books and nothing and I mean nothing was that good. All the words gave it such beatiful meaning. I would rate it more than a ten if they let me. Keep up the good work and please continue.
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Title: This fick has won an award
Reviewed By: cratbro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mazel Tov! You have just won the Erhimer23 award for Online Fiction! All You get is the respect of the hundred and six people who agree with me on giving you this award. |
Title: Reapy to oxygen iv
Reviewed By: (cratbro) On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Grow up. Oh, I might also ask that you maybe rethink your "Ratings" |
Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: (cratbro) On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have NEVER seen such good style and detail, except in Nobel Prize Books. Good Job! I cannot wait for more.
You win. |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i guess im sory mister jay i supposse im no too used to them that's all |
Reviewed By: cultnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant fic. The words you used are maybe a little higher than Ash would know, even if he was older, but then, we never know how he will grow up and it adds to the fic.
For those that didn't read your disclaimer, it's their fault they didn't realise they were a lot older, and for those that didn't understand some of the words you used, I highly doubt they are old enough to read this. If they are old enough, then I seriously doubt their understanding of English.
But, again, brilliant fic. It is beautiful and romantic, not like most of the other hentai out there that are the depth of dispair written by 12 year olds who, by just reading the first few lines you can tell, understand nothing about sex. |
Reviewed By: Jay On: August 08, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how the eff do you use "too complex words"? You must not be too literate. It's called enhance you vocabulary and read more. It's good for you. |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic but only that... i mean is great but there are two bad things about it, one, you use too complex words... and two more than a year has passed since your last update... |
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