| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 06:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, if I were Kagome...I'd just break down and start crying at all the attention from the male persuasion I was getting. I mean...Wouldn't you? Egads! In the 8th chapter I was feeling about as trapped as Kagome probably was with Jaken, Koga, Inu, Haru all in one hut that was already cramped.. Eesh. Just thinking of that makes me all upset-ish. I love this story though! Keep it up ^_^ You're great!
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Reviewed By: SexiMikoK On: May 23, 2008 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D!!! This is good!! Thank you soo much for coming up with this story, writing it, and posting it on this site. Im soo glad that i found it!:D I hope you update soon. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 14:44 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20March0 8/romance1st.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: sweetness427 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, i can't wait till the next chapter. i like the plot, keeps me guessing. will haru really betray sess? or can kagome turn him around? cant wait to found out!!
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Reviewed By: Mirth On: April 06, 2008 12:13 EDT
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Since you're doing something that new thing for your story I've decided on three words for something I'd like to see in the story. Kidnapping, Amnesia, and Despair.
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Reviewed By: ice_vixen_x On: March 20, 2008 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see you updating again. I had almost given up hope. But i know how it feels to have trouble finishing a story. you lose the original excitement you had in the begining. I started to feel that way again with my latest fic so i just sat down in a nice rlaxing environment with a misc. asortment of music and thought up different scenes for the different types of music. they could be a chapter away or 8 ch. away. but if you think of a really good or fun idea that you just fall in love with, you have a drive to reach it and that helps you keep working. I ended up getting about 9 chapters worth of ideas from it and it just keeps growing as i add more to it. Good luck and i can't wait to see how kagome reacts to the +'s and -'s of pregnancy... ^_~
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Title: A Complication for the story ^^
Reviewed By: Mikage Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 09:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I love how this is going and the fact that Kagome understood Sesshoumaru's intentions with the groal gave me an idea. What if the spell they used to make her conceive happened to go awry? And somehow the taiyoukai's blood running through the baby started to somewhat change Kagome-chan? Like add one or two inu behaviours and resistance and such, since after all it is only logical that the youkai blood make her stronger to bear Sesshoumaru's child if allowed, and thats when the spell comes in handy. Also, plz do the marking!!! I'm such a sucker for inu mating's ritual, lol!!! (Yes, I'm implying what most of us expect, K & S have to end up together..right??) Plus I think there ought to be some kind of trigger for the mutation (transformation or something) to begin in Kagome, some need for the blood to make her body stronger and more resilient. Perhaps Aiko could poison her or hurt heer thus being near death, she would miracuously recover after avery hgh fever and almost dying. Well, hope that helps!!! I LOVE all your fanfics! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 02:00 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story was nominated in the category Best Romance (non Inu/Kag) Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Title: YAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: November 08, 2007 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, just freakin awsome. I Loved it! He's opening up to her and it's so cute. Please update soon... ^_~
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Title: Awesome as always
Reviewed By: Mikage Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore how you write. I must say that I started reading your fanfic with as much enthusiasm as I am reading each new chapter as soon as you upload them now. Go on writing, please, or I won't be able to sleep thinking of what is going to happen to Sess and Kags!! I support that pairing 100%!! Keep it up! And thanks in the name of all fanfic readers. Works as good as yours keep the standard high!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: October 27, 2007 23:15 EDT
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This chapter is awesome. His mother is kinda witchy though...will that change? or will she threaten Kagome's life and that of the child? Supposing there is a child? hum.... Sorry not signed in tonight...Daydreamer99
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 02:43 EDT
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AH!!! Yay! I loved it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 09:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice to see you haven't given up on this story yet. And you shouldn't ever. I really like it! I love it how their feelings are slowly growing. Can't wait for the new moon! ;)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 17:58 EDT
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Awe...yay! They kissed! I feel bad for Haru though...is he really going to be a bad guy?
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story today and have read the whole thing till this last chapter and I gotta say I trully like it and cant wait to see more chapters
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