| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 09:43 EDT
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Yay! Another chapter! And a good one, too. Sad about Kaede. Sending Inu to fetch Kikyou, huh? I suppose that will split his concentration on Kagome's situation -- too bad. Loving Haru -- he's Miroku plus! What got into Sess? He must have really been hurting. Haircuts all around? LOL! Wish I could see some fanart with those 'dos. Hope you get a chance to write more soon -- this is GOOD!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: October 15, 2006 23:22 EDT
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Love it!! I dont mind yaoi, so long as its writen neatly & not just sex this sex that... But I have no doubts you'll do a wonderful job. Cant wait to read more. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 19:59 EDT
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One word: AWESOME!! I would really really really enjoy it if you could update soon, ne? XD Anyway, keep up the great job! Ja ne, Bloodcherry
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 19:47 EDT
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Hum....with short hair...Just can't see it! But I'm sure they'd be cute as ever! I really love your characterization and the personalitites you put into everyone! I know that's pretty much saying the same thing...but...Update soon! I gotta know what they are going to do about their little problem!
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Title: chap 10
Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 05:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TO be honest i think inu and sesshy would look good with short hair! SESSHOMARU..IF ONLY HE WERE REAL LOL, loved it!! can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 18:04 EDT
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No problems with any type of side relationships as long as they are tastful and well written which I'm sure you'll do! Love your writing style!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love your story so far I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 07:50 EDT
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I'm just loving this fic and I can't wait for more! This story is just so good and interesting! YAY!
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Title: Shounen ai
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 11:08 EDT
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Please ^_^ I love romantic side stories
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Reviewed By: Kenshinfan230 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!...plz
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Title: Unexpected Endeavors
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Poor Kagome! Having three or four demons on her! Aww! Update a.s.a.p! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: cassie06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i just read all 8 chapters tonight! im so glad i found your story! funny thing is hehe i wrote a fanfic similiar to this! but yours is way better!! i was soo glad reading this i didn't want it to stop!!!!! idk why, but i was sorta excited to think of kagome and sesshomaru.. but the way you showed the relationship between kagome and inuyasha made me blush the entire time while smiling! VERY ROMANTIC! + i love your style of writing!! so how many more chapters do you think you will add? i hope it's alot more cause this is a really great story, and i would almost hate to see it end,,,but i SO want to know what is going to happen! haha.. very great story keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 14:19 EDT
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Um....I'm a little confused...But I'm sure I'll figure it all out soon....So basically because Koga claimed her...though she says no...Sess can't claim her? But InuYasha claims her too...So I'm confused! Anyway! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 10:08 EDT
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OH! How could you just leave off there??? I tell you this every time! You can't leave off there!! You're too good of a writer to leave off there! I must know what happends! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: critical eyes On: September 21, 2006 05:51 EDT
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Ouch, poor Kagome. It´s not funny anymore (actually it is but not for her) to have so many handsome suitors, aah I wish I could be her. As much as I like Kouga I would always choose Sesshoumaru, the dangerous and silent ones are the best *drool*. And I want to see the little silver haired puppy with his fathers face. This is your fic and I like your choises and your style and if you are not comfortable with a lemon than don´t write one. There are many PWP out there but I´m reading your fic because of your main pairing and your plot which is unique. Looking forward to the next chapter and the meeting, whenever it will be, with Sesshoumaru.
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