| "Unexpected Endeavors" Reviews/Comments [ 114 ] |
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter and I definitely like Haru. The whole bit with the canines having a proverbial pissing contest over Kagome was very funny. You were a little harsh on MIroku, though. loosening a tooth and beating him up black and blue? I know the guy has bad manners, but still. . . You implied the women did it on sight, and not simply defending themselves.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: September 17, 2006 15:10 EDT
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Cant wait for the next chapter! I have to wonder where Inu has wandered off to in the middle of the night... in the freezing rain... Kikyo perhaps? Newho... UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster bein lazy On: September 10, 2006 06:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! i must admit though i was pritty miffed at sesshy first when it seemed like he had indeed tricked her into the deal. It is a nice 'new' plot, diffrent in so many ways from the others that it makes it an origional great story line, tis one of the most rollar coastar stories I've read in a long time that pairs sesshy with kags, (and thats a lot!) your story is great and should be complimented as such, so awesome job, and keep updating, i really want to se what happens next and the suspence is killing me! love the story, it should be put up as the best one on mediaminer like they did with Temple of The Dog , im sure everyone would love to read it! :D
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 16:20 EDT
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Oh.... That's all you have written? It's so good that I didn't want to stop reading!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: luver-of-horses On: September 06, 2006 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, excellent fic, i personally love inu/kag pairings but sess/kag are just as good. loved the content, so interesting, with lots of depth and explanations? (thats not what i'm trying to say, i just can't express it) it's really good. please write next chapter super-soon and always remember: NOTHING'S IMPOSSIBLE!!!
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Title: critical eyes
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 11:42 EDT
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Funny story you have here and now you have a plot too. I like that you are not rushing anything and there is not too much OCC´ness like falling in love on first sight *snort*. Kagome still has feelings for Inuyasha even if she is attracted to Sesshoumaru and that is believable. It´s nice to see another side of Jaken. Just for your information: Jaken was the leader of a group of toads and were fighting against a demon when he was (unintentionally) saved by Sesshoumaru. Seshoumaru killed the demon because it was blocking his path and since then Jaken followed him because he admired his strength and beauty. Shortly after that he got the staff of heads from him. Inu no Taisho was already dead but Inuyasha was not sealed yet so I think Jaken is at least about 100 years Seshoumarus retainer. Still I like your idea better. I´m looking forward to how Rin will behave, she is after all a human child and they get jealous when they get a new sibling. Don´t you want to give us a few hints if Seshoumaru and Kagome will actually have a relationship? Please?
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:54 EDT
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Keep at it. I really like it. I watch for updates and read them when I get the notice (which is not something I do often). Thanks for writting an interesting story.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:36 EDT
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I'm really enjoying this story! please continue, I like how you are portraying the characters.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 23:10 EDT
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Cant wait for the next chapter! Love it!!!! Good luck with the history courses ^-^
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! Another update! *dances* I saw some typos here and there, but nothing big. If you need anyone to look over it for you, let me know. I can be your drive-by beta. XD I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it. Keep those chapters coming!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: MistressYume (NLI) On: August 23, 2006 08:33 EDT
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this is pretty cool! ^^ and jaken was a bit ooc in the last chapter....too nice if you ask me =p. but please update soon! i want to see what sesshoumaru-sama wrote!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(lni) On: August 14, 2006 01:42 EDT
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cant wait for the next chapter!!! LUV IT!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(lni) On: August 14, 2006 01:42 EDT
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cant wait for the next chapter!!! LUV IT!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 08:18 EDT
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I am really enjoying this. I like your approach to it. Thanks for sharing. D
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Reviewed By: GoodGirlJay On: August 02, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. i hope you update . can't wait to read more
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