| "Are You Steady Now?" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: damsel On: October 10, 2006 10:11 CDT
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you are killing me! i need to know what is gonna happen next!! please update ASAP!
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Title: ooooh so goood and tasty!
Reviewed By: me On: September 26, 2006 23:03 CDT
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wow - this fic really blows me away! i love it soo much. i am surprised omi doesnt have his new pet telepath keeping an eye on the situation. i love the way you write Yohji and Ran. to die for! more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: September 24, 2006 22:15 CDT
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I hope me writing two reviews for this shows you just how much I want another chapter. I'm on the verge of staging a coup, woman! Pleeeeeeease!
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Title: So incredibly amazing
Reviewed By: Rabid Rabbit On: September 19, 2006 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read and re-read this fic so many times trying to suck as much enjoyment out of it as I can! It's that good! I simply love how the angst doesn't take over the story, but makes it wonderful. The characters are realistic and the scenario entirely believeable. I really don't want to beg, but I feel that I must. Please update as soon as possible! I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Roxie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you... and this fanfic. This is all you really need to know: I hate RanxYohji. I HATE it with a firey passion. The only time I can read this pairing is if everything else is really good. There are only two Weiss stories that I have ever read which were Ran & Yohji that I liked. This will be story number three, now. If you can make me like this pairing, in my opinion it means you're an awesome author. I also love the length of the chapters. They're very substantial, which makes me happy. Too often writers have very very short chapters, which annoys me. This is a perfect chapter length. ^_^;; Your spelling and grammar is impeccable, by the way. I'm a grammar nazi, and I haven't found one thing wrong yet. And like I said, I'm reading this because I think the concept is absolutely fabulous. The plot is just so awesome. The way you write their emotions and feelings is done very well. I love how Ran kept all those things of Yohji's, and Yohji (like he says) dreams of Ran, not Asuka. Amazing, just a simply amazing story. I'm glad I liked the summary and decided to read it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 20:24 CDT
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I'm enjoying this very much. I love stories where Aya and Yoji get together, and the traumatic post-Gluhen ones can be so nice -- all that longing... Your presentation of Ran as sexy and in control of himself and able to function in the world is so appealing; I really liked hooking him up with Yoji's friend, and Yoji's jealousy. And there are lots of nice details -- Aya smoking Yoji's brand of cigarettes, Ryou tracing Aya's scars on Asuka's body without realizing it, Ryou running his finger over Ran's knuckes at the bar... Of course, the sex scene was v. rewarding, too. Also the almost-sex scene in front of the dryer. Poor Ran, all revved up over and over and never got to get off! Eagerly looking forward to seeing that situation rectified.
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 20:45 CDT
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Ooh, poor Yohji, asking a loaded question like that. Does Ran love him as he is or only as he was? Excellent! Hopefully, Ran comes up with the right answer.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 12:37 CDT
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Woweeeeee. I so need more. Right now. Desperately.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 08:16 CDT
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aaarrgghh RQ and spoilers!!! Anyway, I really love the disassociation Yohji had with his body: "Yohji couldn't help it when his eyes took the opportunity to wander over Ran's naked torso," makes a perfect example of Yohji's fighting with his mind. Write faster ;)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 08:07 CDT
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man...there's such fabulous chemistry between this incarnation of YxA. makes me almost sad that schuldig's gonna butt his big fluffy orange head into things next chapter. but, i do love me some schuldig, and as you've assured that schu and yohji aren't going to run off together to set the world on fire, i'll just look forward to the telepath getting a little face time. cool cameo from crawford, too--will there be an explanation as to why he helped out aya? something to do with his last words in gluhen, maybe? oh wait, you only watched the last ep of gluhen...never mind. poor aya... he really did get the shit end of the stick in their 'relationship'...i'm guessing he prefers yohji without the drinking and the uber-darkness and the sleeping around...
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:30 CDT
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Shoot, I just realized I wrote spoilers. Hrm... Can you delete reviews?
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:29 CDT
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what a satisfying chapter. So well done! It really explained it well and I found the presence of Crawford at Yohji's hospital room fascinating. Sorry, too sleepy to leave a coherent review so will have to do it when I reread the chapter. I loved it, in any case. Yohji and the pants were funny!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 20:45 CDT
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Wow! Chapter 5 is spectacular! I love that we're able to feel the frustration of both Ran and Yohji; it's very intense for the reader! I hope that Yohji is able to come to a resolution soon (and, of course, that he ends up with Ran!). I'm looking forward to the next installment. Your writing is absolutely riveting and I found myself on the edge of my seat more than once!
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Reviewed By: kurokuro On: September 01, 2006 00:13 CDT
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Ummmm, more please?? I just read the first four chapters tonight and I definitely hope this will be continued :)
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Reviewed By: me On: August 21, 2006 22:17 CDT
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i neeed an update! and i have to second Mikko - i hope Ran is the uke . hope to see more soon!!!
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