| "Are You Steady Now?" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: neon99 On: July 26, 2006 09:46 CDT
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wow!! love this story!!! you hav to complete this!! cant wait till ur next update!!!
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Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more, more. Must have more. I really hate being insanely addicted to stories that I crave them. I love your writing!!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:33 CDT
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Are you getting tired of me telling you how good this is yet? I don't want to be redundant, but I'm really impressed with this story and absolutely addicted to it! It's SO good! The ideas are presented in a fresh way, the writing is outstanding, and your descriptions (especially of Yohji's inner critters) are painfully accurate! You're doing an INCREDIBLE job with this! Once again, I'm anticipating the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 13:43 CDT
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argh...it's one o' them super-frustrating fics, eh? the kind where you want to strangle pretty much everyone until stuff is all sorted out...argh, poor aya! *stabs electrodes in Ryou's brain to facilitate memory recovery* hee...takatori probably will have to make a political marriage himself, i'm guessing. poor naoe. more, please.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 12:03 CDT
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NOOOO!!!!!!!!! You're torturing me and, while I love it, I also hate it!! Ooohhh, so good! This is SO good and I'm completely hooked! I can't wait for the next update...I think. I'm a little scared, too! Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 24, 2006 10:27 CDT
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oh no! poor Aya i'm dying for the next bits!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good start on this one. I've enjoyed reading several fics that continue past Gluhen ignoring side B (which I prefer to ignore as well unless it includes Yohji with Aya *grin*). I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. I think it's well written so far; you've captured emotion beautifully though you might consider a bit more description for the characters (i.e. hair style, eyes, etc.)
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Title: Gothria
Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 04:32 CDT
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wow that was...stunning!! give us more, MORE!! i really like the connections. i do believe, however, that Yohji's car is a Lotus, not that it's really important, but so ya know. just one question, does ran have eartails again? or is it long, or what? overall, i LOVE this idea, so update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 09:52 CDT
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*very* good! can't wait for the next part, and what Ran will do.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 21:16 CDT
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Wah!! So sad! You MUST update this! And soon! It's so good, Omni! I want to knock their heads together and tell them to knock it off! I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! Yohji can't marry that...that...woman! And Ran needs to stop with the "I'm no good for you crap," and take back what's HIS! Well, I hope so, anyway! Wonderful, truly! Keep going!!!!! *hugs* ~Blythe
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