| "The Fate of a Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 04:53 EDT
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So.. I read this a long time ago and glad that you updated! :o) Good Job! I like how you subtly incorporated some of the characters. Can't wait to see whats next!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. oh my god. OH MY GOD! this is amazing. please update soon im DIEING to know what happen next. go kagome! now go and mate with imuyasha! dont stop now keep up the great work and update soon!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 17:16 EDT
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OMG, I'm so happy you updated! ^^ The last time it was only the first chapter that I had read but I must say that I am SO pleased that you returned and are planning on continuing this story. I absolutely LOVED all that imagery that was going on, with Inuyasha strapped to that tree in the state he was in. It was primal, seductive, and sensual. *fans self* whew, that was wonderful! All I can say is, if you continue to write like that for the rest of this story then I have no doubt readers will flock to it and become addicted. You capture emotions and life in general so well that it was easy to visualize and feel what was happenning. The plot is very original too as I haven't read any other situations like this. Sure, I've read fics where he was amorous, but this one goes a step beyond the rest and puts a serious plot and reasoning behind it all. To finish, I truly hope you stick with the style of writing you've chosen so far and keep writing as wonderfully as you do. Keep up the great work and I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. ;)
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 13:01 EDT
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OMG!!!! MORE!!..This is the beginning of a great story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 On: May 06, 2007 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. i love ur story! i amd dying out of suspence! i love it! please Please PLEASE keep it going!! i love this story! it is so good! it is one of the best fanfics i have ever read. not even kidding! i love it!
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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 On: May 06, 2007 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I love your story! Its really one of the best fanfictions I have read Please Pleas upload another chapter when you can Ja ne
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:07 EDT
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This story is soooo good!! PLEASE update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next!! =)
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Reviewed By: Suikidoen On: May 04, 2007 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D: dies from suspence!
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Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: May 04, 2007 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME! I'm dieing to know what's gonna happen next!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 19:52 EDT
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Wow. The tension and emotion in this is just......wow. Can't wait to see how you turn this out. You have been 'favorite'ed.
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Reviewed By: White Diamonds On: May 04, 2007 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love so far how the plot is going, and I love the intensity being shown. Your portrayal of the characters emotions, even in two chapters, makes me look forward to their character development, and I can't wait to see how this story plays out!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 00:33 EDT
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Ack!! You must update soon! I can already see I'm really gonna love this one :)
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Reviewed By: aj On: May 03, 2007 23:58 EDT
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ok now this IS totally awsome update soon really soon please
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 01:22 EDT
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Great beginning! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: aj On: May 01, 2007 00:44 EDT
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update please this sounds totally awsome!!!
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