| "The Fate of a Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~Sami On: September 30, 2006 12:44 EDT
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I'm r-e-a-l-l-y hoping for an update.........next chapter sounded *yum*!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh please update soon this is a great story and i cant wait till you update. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 20:42 EDT
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I really like this. I hope that you continue. I am putting it in my fav so please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Koski [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Please update soon.
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Title: GREAT!!!!XD
Reviewed By: Leigo On: July 31, 2006 05:21 EDT
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its a great story. I really like it and I hope that you update soon. I would really love to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely accept Inuyasha as he is!!! I mean who could resist those doggie ears!! Love the story. ~Radhika
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Title: yea
Reviewed By: twilight00dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story im anxious to see how you continue it ^_^
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 01:28 EDT
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This is a good beginning. ^^ It seems that with the time constriction the Inu/Kag relationship will be extremely rushed. I'm sure you have a way around that and all, considering they just met and Kags isn't going to instantly become his mate, lol. I am curious as to how things will turn out! :) The characterization so far is very good. It's a nice story so far and I hope to be able to review more of it in the future when more of it is written! P.S. Perhaps there'll be youkai courting or maybe time to get to know Inuyasha's demon side since Kags met only his human side? P.S.S. I'll wait till you've written more before I rate it. ^^
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Reviewed By: miss lisa On: July 25, 2006 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it so fare hope to read more
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 24, 2006 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great start! You've done a good job so far with this story. I can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can. Does Kagome volunteer to become Inuyasha's mate? Please let it be that.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:05 EDT
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OMG i Love this story please update soooooooon
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Reviewed By: AznxPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 12:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o' whoa i think i know whats going to happen hehe and i'm going to love every little bit of it update soon ^^
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Title: Rikku-chan
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWw poor inu and that damned kikyo How I hate her so... KAgome and inu 4eva...ok enough randomness ...I can't wait to read more I really luv ur story....
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 24, 2006 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was surprisingly good. I thought it would be a lot different, but I find it unique in its own way. I hope you update soon!! I really enjoyed reading this chapter! :o) Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 02:23 EDT
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Good start. I hope to read more soon. You might want to allow anyone to review instead of only people who are signed in. You'll get more reviews that way. I almost didn't review because you have it set to restrict unsigned reviews and I'm too lazy to log in most of the time. But still, I thought you would want to know that I like your story so far. Your writing skills are good (grammar and spelling) and you've set the scene well. Please post the next chapter soon. Thanks.
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