| "The Fate of a Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 21:59 EDT
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That was funny. I havent read a fanfic like this in forever. Its funny and thankfully canoning pairing.
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Reviewed By: sins On: May 24, 2007 19:32 EDT
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hahah im so happy i cant even type right!
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Reviewed By: sins On: May 24, 2007 19:31 EDT
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OMG YA you updated im so HOPPY ! new CHAPPY i love it by the was >-< lemon!
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Title: wow!!!
Reviewed By: mellf On: May 24, 2007 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! i cant wait for you to update. I wonder how long are you going to make this story? it's really go but are you going to stop once he's fully mated or are you gonna go into "the hardships that come with her being his mate?"
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing! i loved it! kagome and inuyasha half lemon! and they are finally going to be mates! is inuyasha going to go back to hanyou inuyasha after? abd stop being youki inuyasha? and even id he doesnt is kagome going to relize him from his bonds? oh please update soon you are an amazing writer and im at the edge od my seat waiting to find out what ahppens next! keep up the spectacular work!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u WILL update. What about Sesshomaru? isn't he in this fic? i'm not a huge sesshomaru fan but i still asks. i think u are doing a pretty good job so keep going on
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 15:35 EDT
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OMG, did I ever enjoy that chapter! lol Need I tell you once again that you capture passion and lust so easily that it's palpable? Seriously, you have a talent and I'm glad you're using it to write this story! ^^ I was breathless myself when I came to the end of the chapter and then I was like...WHAT?! Where's the rest of it?? lolol I guess I'll have to wait till next chapter. ;) I hope you continue right from the moment where you left off because you had a really good mood and atmosphere going there. I love how the two of them coaxed each other to respond and you had just the right balance of innocence and lust. It was just perfect! Wow, now I have to resign myself to the fact that I have to wait and it won't be easy. =P lol Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way the story is starting to play out. Your style of writing is abslutely amazing... the story flows so well. I am very much enjoying this story and I hope you get to update soon!! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I wish I was as good as you! Update soon plese!!! :)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: May 24, 2007 13:14 EDT
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What a chapter. Left me breathless. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: May 24, 2007 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the best. I could not wait for the next chapter. I just wondering how old Inuyasha is in this story. I know that they are not that young in this story or they would not be doing the nasty. Eventhough this story is greeeeeeat. I have been waiting for this chapter for a long time. Hope no one walks in on what they both are doing. I was wondering what will happen after they finish mating. Will Inuyasha be back to himself or will they continue to mate until the season is over? I just can't wait any longer for the next chapter. Hope to see it soon cause this is the best story so far.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeezum crow, that was HOT!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. I love how amazingly seductive Inuyasha is without even being able to truly move. I think the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha is perfect. My only complaint is that you only updated once, delaying me from reading more of your story. I will remain patient, for an excellent story like this is worth the wait, but please for everyones sake, update soon please. Sincerely, Zach Bartell
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: May 24, 2007 08:47 EDT
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I love it!!!!!! But.... what if they come back earlier than expected and see them doing that..... hmmm .... anyways I can't wait for your next update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 03:41 EDT
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Niiiiiiiiiiiice...... Man, is it hot in here or what? That was positively evil, and yet oh so good! Excellent sexual tension, can't wait to find out what the families have to say when they return.
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Reviewed By: S0v3r31gnty On: May 22, 2007 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your making me spend time in class to see if you have up dated!!!! shit going now before I get caught -Sovereignty... to lazy to log on
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