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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 23:12 CDT
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Great story I have to say it is really interesting...Sesshomoru is totally learning that he is not the most important thing in the world and that he need Inuyasha,,,He better go off and rescue him fast!!! Does he even know that Inuyasha is pregnant>?>?>
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I guess, the old saying is true; 'you never miss the water, until the well runs dry!' I wonder what Sesshomaru will do now? Til the next chapter~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Hopefully Sesshomaru rescues Inuyasha soon!! It's nice that he reconized Inuyasha as his mate.....it's about time!! (LOL) Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Title: 0_0
Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 04:42 CDT
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I liked it as always ^_^ Poor Inuyasha, hopefully sess will appear and kick Naraku's ass! XD Update asap please! Shigure-san x chuu x
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Title: omfg...
Reviewed By: [CoinxOperatedxBoy] On: June 12, 2007 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that little lemon scene in ch10 was HOT! so... how big is sesshomaru n e way?
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 08:03 CDT
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i couldnt rate your fic. i know why i am reading, each time, i hope the angst would be over. but the angst keeps going on and on and on. it is - as if you hated inuyasha. everytime his lot improves somehow, you ruin somewhat is inuyasha not fit for happiness in your fic? so i am terribly upset with your fic and i cant say i enjoy them angst is good for only so long anyway. just thought i'd let you know that the angst is a little bit too much for me
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inu...WHY ISN'T SESSHY THERE YET?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, I wonder what Naraku has got up his sleeve this time!! Sesshomaru needs to get there fast! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the great work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 23:26 CDT
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Oh shit!!! Inuyasha's pregnant?!?! Since he is a hanyou, does that mean he's been pregnant all this time? Or is Naraku the father? And what is up with Sess? Since when does he start listening to Jaken? He could have easily sent Jaken back to the castle to explain things! Why was it so important for Sess to return to the castle himself, instead of taking off to find InuYasha? There's something fishy going on here! Great chapter, as always~ B reading U! Later!
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Title: What will come next?
Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for you to finish the story.It is quite fascinating.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 05:12 CDT
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LOVE this story as usual ^_^ Keep up the writing and i will be eagerly anticipating your next update ^_^ -- Seeya sweetie! Shigure-san x chu x
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh I can't believe the nerve of naraku that he would actually do something like tghat to poor Inu....DAMMIT!!!! Sesshoumaru should have known better than t leave Inu alone especially if h eknows others want him or the potential of his enemies!!! Good chapter.....it's just that Sesshoumaru's detachment is frustrating ya know?! Anyway again good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha!! Hopefully Sesshomaru gets there soon to save him! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 08:59 CDT
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ah poor inu
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Title: I am your mother!... idk.. something has to go here
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood-Not signed in On: May 02, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
meh........ i missed a spot!! O_O! lol oh well i don't care, its not even noticable to the reader if they're not looking. at any rate, there are a few uploading errors that don't look like they'd affect the story too much. And hahaha i've read this chapter about 5 times XD, as always i can find other things i can play with. but thats for the next chapter. whoop whoop, this is looking even better. maybe i can throw in another few hands into the lemon scenes. I"m good with those. You can never have too many discriptions in a lemon scene. Looks like sesshies going to do some serious ass kicking if he doesn't find inuyasha soon. well he does know that naraku has him now... O_o SUPER DOGGY TO THE RESCUE! ^_^ Best chapter yet. lets keep it going this way
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