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Reviewed By: polka dot On: May 02, 2007 20:33 CDT
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I guess Naraku had to show up some time. Too bad for Inu but I know Sesshy will come to save the day.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooooo glad you updated! Great chapter as always! B reading U! Later!
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually kind of liked Inuyasha being a slut. I mean it was pretty interesting to say none the less. I didnt expect to be that aroused from a submissive inu-hanyou. I think you also did pretty good with containing the ooc-ness to a minumun. Especially with the submissive inu-hanyou having him be broken first then became so submissive.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so glad you updated, loved the update, not as much sesshyxInu yumminess as I'd have liked but still very good. ^_^ Oh no Naraku hisses at him that guy always ruins things lol. Does that mean Sesshy's gonna stop using inuyasha just to sleep with him and actually be nice for a change? ^_^ lol. Update soon!!! - Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope Sesshoamru finds Inuyasha before Naraku hurts him TOO bad! At least no one can say that Sesshomaru doesn't care about Inuyasha! Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and once again i'm impresseed and very happy with how eachchapter is turning out. Each chapter has kept me on my toes and not once have you disappointed. The story is flowing along beautifully and once again I await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 05:49 CST
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That lemon was Hot! LOL. I think I like that lemon best so far, since I like seeing Sesshomaru being a bit nicer to poor Inuyasha. And THANKS FOR UPDATING! I think I did a little dance when I got an email saying another chapter was up. I was kinda hoping one of the two guys would be Tsukyomaru, since it got the chance for Inuyasha to show how much he loves Sesshomaru *basks and goes back to re-read chapter*. And What do you MEAN not very good at lemons?!!!! *is confused* I love your lemons, they're a darn sight better than mine! ^_^ I'm a little confused though, since you've mentioned somethin about Inuyasha havin' the ability to have babies (pups - whatever you wanna call them) are you going to have MPREG in this story? I dnt mind if you do or you dnt, (I'll still love this story in any case ^_^), I was just wondering. Oh, and YAY for Inuyasha's **** problem being sorted out *blushes*. Any-who, update soon!!!! love Shigure-san
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol geez you get all the nice long reviews! ^_^ very nice to know that i'm doing a great job working with you on your grammer and stuff and you of course doing an excellent job writting it all ^_^; I think if you do make another story, you should just really be laid back with it, meaning that you should make it on your own and not going by the storyline as well as japanese words like what you have. sure its a great touch but most can find it annoying having to scroll all the way down the page just to find a word, ya know? well its still really great! I can't wait to get your next chapt to read and beta- cheers ^^
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Reviewed By: SoSick OfNyQuil On: February 21, 2007 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your writing style it's very original and it flows throughout the story. It's very creative i've loved it since the first chapter and i've always found it entertaining to read. it keeps me on my toes..i happen to love a submissive inuyasha and a very dominant sesshoumaru...your story entranes both my romantic side and my anger when you describe sesshoumaru's cold attitude but also yo portray a part of him that's believeable in character to how he usually acts. He's not some sort of sop who instantly goes from cold to hot in 3 seconds. His caring fits in with his regular chilly demeanor and that's hard to find in fanfiction writing because writers tend to rush along the feelings and emotion when the character usually needs more time or even if it doesn't and the feeling is there, it should be believable with the actual story line. I enjoy your story and will continue to read as faithfully as i can so please keep the chapters coming. devoted fan, SSONQ aka Sky
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Reviewed By: Cat695 On: February 20, 2007 11:59 CST
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I like the lemon sex scenes, you have talked about the blood sports, but you haven't had any bondage or toy play. Inu tries these on himself, but he hasn't had Sess do any of them. How about a little leather play or toys as Sess watches Inu cum.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well worth the wait! That was so HOT! I'm so glad you are back. Don't leave us hanging like that, it was mean! Great chapter, update soon!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter....I'm so glad you updated!!!!!!! The lemon scene was very well written!! I can't wait to see what happens next, so update as soon as possible please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 04:47 CST
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heya ^_ In re-reading your fic, I realised i didn't answer your question in your previous chapter. the 2 Guys i think could be The thunder brothers, or even Tsukyomaru and somebody, that could be quite interesting. ^_^ Neways, update soon! -- Shigure-san
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Title: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz review i haveta know who they are good story by the way a littke more insight into sess feelings would be useful.
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Reviewed By: Nannami Hikari On: January 30, 2007 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ne, ne, your story is EXCELLENT! Sorry i have not reviewed before but my computer is a bit of an ass when it comes to the review page ^_^ I like your references to the japanese culture and the use of language etc. I think that it serves the story quite well, after all, the slave-trade business requires alot of the japanese phrases and names to deal with, ne? I love the SesshoumaruxInuyasha pairing *drools*, and your story involves alot of the anime's characters as well, like Tsukyomaru and The Thunder brothers, which I think is cool lol. But I think my favorite 'extras' were Jakotsu and Bankotsu ^_^ I feel so sorry for Inuyasha becoming Sesshoumaru's 'play-thing' *growls*. I also like how you've explained Inuyasha's out-of-character reasons, I normally don't like authors writing characters too OOC, but you've developed them well and it's quite reasonable for Inuyasha to behave as he does. You've got some talent! Neways, you haven't updated in a while, ne? Are you having some writer's block or something? From one author to the next I'll just throw some ideas at ya (since I like people doing that to me when I'm stuck or lacking in inspiration to write). You could have Inuyasha get accidentally pregnant (since I notice Sesshoumaru hasn't made any references to knowing Inuyasha can become pregnant), and Sesshoumaru can get into a whole guilt-trip confusion over it all. Just a suggestion, since I think Sesshoumaru deserves some confusion at the moment lol. Oh, and can you please let little Inuyasha please get some help with his *blushes* "problem" if you get what I mean *blushes darker* poor little guy needs a break ^_^ Anyway, I think the two demons should be the Thunder brothers (cause they're so good at stirring stuff up ^.^), either way, make Sesshoumaru a bit nicer and stick up for Inuyasha a little more, all this 'bullying' tugs at your heart some lol. Keep up the good work and please update soon! ~*~ Love Nannami Hikari (Nanna-kun).
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