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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, I wonder what Naraku has got up his sleeve this time!! Sesshomaru needs to get there fast! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the great work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 23:26 CDT
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Oh shit!!! Inuyasha's pregnant?!?! Since he is a hanyou, does that mean he's been pregnant all this time? Or is Naraku the father? And what is up with Sess? Since when does he start listening to Jaken? He could have easily sent Jaken back to the castle to explain things! Why was it so important for Sess to return to the castle himself, instead of taking off to find InuYasha? There's something fishy going on here! Great chapter, as always~ B reading U! Later!
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Title: What will come next?
Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for you to finish the story.It is quite fascinating.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 05:12 CDT
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LOVE this story as usual ^_^ Keep up the writing and i will be eagerly anticipating your next update ^_^ -- Seeya sweetie! Shigure-san x chu x
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh I can't believe the nerve of naraku that he would actually do something like tghat to poor Inu....DAMMIT!!!! Sesshoumaru should have known better than t leave Inu alone especially if h eknows others want him or the potential of his enemies!!! Good chapter.....it's just that Sesshoumaru's detachment is frustrating ya know?! Anyway again good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha!! Hopefully Sesshomaru gets there soon to save him! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 08:59 CDT
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ah poor inu
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Title: I am your mother!... idk.. something has to go here
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood-Not signed in On: May 02, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
meh........ i missed a spot!! O_O! lol oh well i don't care, its not even noticable to the reader if they're not looking. at any rate, there are a few uploading errors that don't look like they'd affect the story too much. And hahaha i've read this chapter about 5 times XD, as always i can find other things i can play with. but thats for the next chapter. whoop whoop, this is looking even better. maybe i can throw in another few hands into the lemon scenes. I"m good with those. You can never have too many discriptions in a lemon scene. Looks like sesshies going to do some serious ass kicking if he doesn't find inuyasha soon. well he does know that naraku has him now... O_o SUPER DOGGY TO THE RESCUE! ^_^ Best chapter yet. lets keep it going this way
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Reviewed By: polka dot On: May 02, 2007 20:33 CDT
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I guess Naraku had to show up some time. Too bad for Inu but I know Sesshy will come to save the day.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooooo glad you updated! Great chapter as always! B reading U! Later!
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually kind of liked Inuyasha being a slut. I mean it was pretty interesting to say none the less. I didnt expect to be that aroused from a submissive inu-hanyou. I think you also did pretty good with containing the ooc-ness to a minumun. Especially with the submissive inu-hanyou having him be broken first then became so submissive.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so glad you updated, loved the update, not as much sesshyxInu yumminess as I'd have liked but still very good. ^_^ Oh no Naraku hisses at him that guy always ruins things lol. Does that mean Sesshy's gonna stop using inuyasha just to sleep with him and actually be nice for a change? ^_^ lol. Update soon!!! - Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope Sesshoamru finds Inuyasha before Naraku hurts him TOO bad! At least no one can say that Sesshomaru doesn't care about Inuyasha! Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and once again i'm impresseed and very happy with how eachchapter is turning out. Each chapter has kept me on my toes and not once have you disappointed. The story is flowing along beautifully and once again I await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 05:49 CST
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That lemon was Hot! LOL. I think I like that lemon best so far, since I like seeing Sesshomaru being a bit nicer to poor Inuyasha. And THANKS FOR UPDATING! I think I did a little dance when I got an email saying another chapter was up. I was kinda hoping one of the two guys would be Tsukyomaru, since it got the chance for Inuyasha to show how much he loves Sesshomaru *basks and goes back to re-read chapter*. And What do you MEAN not very good at lemons?!!!! *is confused* I love your lemons, they're a darn sight better than mine! ^_^ I'm a little confused though, since you've mentioned somethin about Inuyasha havin' the ability to have babies (pups - whatever you wanna call them) are you going to have MPREG in this story? I dnt mind if you do or you dnt, (I'll still love this story in any case ^_^), I was just wondering. Oh, and YAY for Inuyasha's **** problem being sorted out *blushes*. Any-who, update soon!!!! love Shigure-san
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