| "Rubies & Sapphires" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yet another awsome fic =)
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 16:19 CDT
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i need more or i will have an anurizm(sp?) i like this spin on the naruto universe.
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Reviewed By: tylor On: August 03, 2006 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story it mead me cry becaus i lived in an orphanage one time i would never let a four year old go thru what i went thru.well i like this story and your other ones so keep wrighting bye
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Reviewed By: Lone Kyuubi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, great story you've written. I also read Return of the Bijus and A tale of Two Bijus and both were well done. (I LOVED THEM!) One question though abotu this chapter (I know this chapter will be redone sometime soon but i just wanted to point this out) If the Hokage was injured, wouldn't Naruto want to go see the guy or at least send him a "Get Well Soon" card? I mean, The old man protected him for a good few years, it's the least Naruto could do.
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Reviewed By: Christine_nicole On: August 01, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like ur srories dont stop writing cause som dumbasses r gonna b gay k im gonna sound like an idiot for a sec i did that rating thing and i didnt no if 10 was the hightest or lowest i hope it was the highest cause thats wat i meant it to b or w.e email me back if u can with the chapters and if u dont email me o well i still like ur stories later
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Reviewed By: Alacard_child On: August 01, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a perfect story, as with your other fictions, you provide a well thought out storyline, a highly canon attatude for the cast, and manage to make it all tie togather. its a shame people falme, because of all the authorsa i come here to read, your fics are the top priorty. my deepest thanks for for shareing your talent with us.
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Reviewed By: Katana Haibane On: August 01, 2006 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you've convinced me that a NarutoXKurenai fic is feasible when done properly. I still don't particularly like that pairing, but you pulled it off without too much trouble. Great explaination of the Hiraishin by the way, very scientifically feasible, at least in terms of the way the Naruto world works with chakra thrown into the balance. I don't quite understand why Naruto would figure that he would stand no chance against Itachi and Kisame. His skill level is pretty much the same, or maybe even beyond the timeskip Naruto. Is it due to a smaller chakra capacity? Or are members of the Akatsuki more powerful than in the cannon? Orochimaru also seems to have taken to the background. He hasn't lost his arms to Sarutobi so is he just lurking in the background, waiting for an opportunity? Or has he made his move already? As for the rating I gave you: your writing is superb. 'Nough said.
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Reviewed By: Darrell On: August 01, 2006 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad Not bad but i don't think you noticed but the matches were kinda screwed up from in between the chapters. Bacause in 1 chap you had Naruto/Shino but in the next it was NAruto/Kiba but thats ok. Also with Lee when he's using the gates. He's not using the Shushin but instead is literally jumping and bouncing off the walls too fast for the human eye to see remember Lee can't use Chakra so how can he use Shushin. Well eagerly awaiting your next chapter
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Title: animeking_01
Reviewed By: Silent Watcher On: August 01, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it this by far one of my favorites. hope you update soon 'kay.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_lovr (to-lazy-to-log-in-right-now) On: August 01, 2006 11:33 CDT
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I luv u person! YAY! They finally kiss on the lips! I luv Kurnei/Naruto pairinigs. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phwee!!! This story is awesome! I don't think I've ever read a KurenaixNaruto fic before, and the way you keeep to the original plotline with some modifications is really cool --- you've been keeping the characters in character, which is good. Definitely one of the better stories I've read, probably in the top five. 10/10
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Reviewed By: Touketsu On: July 31, 2006 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i Mostly reviewed to convey my support to your AN on FF.net dont take shit from anyone. Story is kickass more writers like u would go a long way to curing the shit that swamps fanfic sites like the plague
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 31, 2006 02:19 CDT
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p.s. love the logic at how naruto would be a super smart if only someone had moulded him at a younge age, just to let you know i totally agree. one thing to point out i also love the way you made your 'own' (meaning using kakashi as roll modle) personality for naruto, in most of the other ones i notace that even though he had a person other than the hokage to suport him he was still hyper and a prankster to get attention. to say again, luv the way the fic turned out. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 31, 2006 02:10 CDT
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i dont think ive told any one how much i love really long chapters, ya some times you get stuck in the middle cuz you have to go do something but really when you dont have many chapters to read but all the chapters aare really long it makes the experiance all the better. by the way luv the fic it was great hope you do more soon cuz this is a fic that deserves recognition. sorry bout the long reveiw but i like to be verily detailed, im just weird that way. update soon ja ne.
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Title: To lazy to login
Reviewed By: I am Dustin Imthurn On: July 30, 2006 21:20 CDT
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Good matches but shouldent Oro have atacked the 3rd?
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Title: beware the power of the sun
Reviewed By: Shadow_Man On: July 30, 2006 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alhtough you had a few spelling errors going through the story i found no real problem with this naruto fic. the way you portrayed naruto was perfect. i notace that most people even though they set him up with friends at an early age they never think that he would have come out different because he had people who acknowledged him. so all in all id have to give this 13 out of 10 it was just that good. although i do wonder about what happened to all the bad guys, cuz other than kabuto and gaara i didnt see anyone else who naturally came down under the section of 'evil'. another thing i was wondering, cuz it is an obvious fact that the hokage hazent died so where does Tsunade come in? will she just be found to heal up Lee (who if we are minorly following the story had to have the opperation) or will that never happen? arggg i have way to many questions so when you update please at least answer one of these questions if it isnt in the immediate chapter. well g2g, ya no r&r some more fics, *waves good bye* ja ne
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Reviewed By: Naruto_lovr (to-lazy-to-log-in-right-now) On: July 30, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool ending for the chuunin exams, but what about Orochimaru? He has to fit in somewhere in this, as well as the Organization after Naruto. Anyway, update soon.
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Reviewed By: l33tone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i jsut got my mm account so i decided to post ja ne
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Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kICK ASS Will he still learn from ero-sennin
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 10:52 CDT
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Cool. I like your new chapter. Update soon.
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Title: RUBIES AND SAPHIRES
Reviewed By: sasugafaita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really awesome story, i hope it continues in the future. (translation: This is FUCKIN awesome, KEEP IT UP!!)
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Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KICKS SO MUCH FUCKING ASS FUCKIN ROCKS!!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: Rydeon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 22:30 CDT
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Havent yet got to read this, but will later tonight. Just gotta say Im glad I added you to my favorite authors list cause your always coming out with some fun looking stories =)
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